Reviews For Date, Interrupted
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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2023 07:06 am Title: The Morning After

Very nice

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 09:27 am Title: The Morning After

I remember starting this story, so I'm glad I went back to finish reading, because you did a great job with their date.  Jim was so sweet e-mailing everyone to come to the show.  I love that Pam did a coal walk painting and that Oscar acknowledged her improvement.  The second roof date was sweet and romantic.  Creed, somewhat oblivious in the morning, was hysterical, as usual.

Love the sweet little moments between them, and the banter.  I would certainly agree with Pam that things are looking up!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 03:26 pm Title: The Morning After

Oooh, I would say that reads like a good end to the first date.

It was a really sweet story. I love FDFs!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 10:46 pm Title: The Morning After

That was such a sweet ending. They we're so sweetly happy... Ahhh...
Sleeping on the floor of the office was superb and Creed was great.
Very nice.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 06:29 pm Title: The Morning After

The date that nobody wants to end.  (Excuse me for a minute while I squee!!!  Ok, better.)

The second first date was 10 kinds of awesome.  And no wonder the girl's legs gave out.  Nicely done. 

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 06:12 pm Title: The Morning After

Awww Jack and Patty sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g!  Well done on the entire story.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 05:58 pm Title: The Morning After

I was so excited to see another chapter, and you didn't disappoint.  I'm sorry to see it end : )

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 05:48 pm Title: The Morning After

aww....I half-expect Jim to come in for an afternoon nap.  ;-)

Nice, nice job! 

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 05:12 pm Title: The Morning After

Yes, "finally," indeed. :) How wonderfully bizarre is Creed anyway? And yet, he just seems to fit in so perfectly with Jim and Pam (or is it Jack and Patty?) 

Nice! [/kevin] 

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