Date: September 07, 2007 07:58 am Title: Walk on the Wild Side
So random and minor - but you can make the word gravelly work. I wanted to use it in a story and it just sounded weird. But here, it works. Oh well.
Yeah Jim.... its bad with Pam when you willingly want to subject yourself to a Michael/Ryan call.
Oh, since this review is already a "see you are a great writer because of blank" review, I figure I will add this. Normally, I can't totally see Jim and Pam being this honest and talking with each other, but somehow it works here. See... darn you. Too good!
I can see both Jim's point of not wanting to tell her what to do, and Pam's point of saying he can like give his opinion. It seems like I have a real life reference of that somewhere up in my head, but I can't think of it.
I don't think many people would complain if Jim (or John) posed in Playgirl...
Date: August 15, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Awww...I'm glad they were able to compromise. Now...what will Angela do?? Great Creed line in there with the nudity...of course. Can't wait to read more! (I've been spoiled in being behind because I can read to much at once.)
Date: August 13, 2007 08:50 am Title: Walk on the Wild Side
I really like how you've created a serious situation/roadblock/disagreement in their relationshipb ut the best part is your solution here. I love how it is not all happy and perfect, they disagree and struggle to discuss it, but deal and compromise well. Frankly it is a really great compromise.
Date: August 10, 2007 10:09 am Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Woohoo Pam! Now she just has to convince Angela. She's on a roll. I think she can do it.
I love Jim's guilt as claiming Pam as "his". So sweet and old-fashioned. But just as fun was how quickly he got over it with the prospect of lingerie sessions! HA!
Date: August 09, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Great as usual. You should write for the show! I relly mean that!
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Date: August 09, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Great as usual. You should write for the show! I relly mean that!
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Date: August 09, 2007 02:31 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
I love this story more with every chapter. I love how you are writing Jim. He's so careful and hesitant with Pam. He just so...Jim!
Can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 02:27 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Well played, my friend. Well played. And your Creed and Phyllis? Nailed them. Another great chapter in an incredibly fun story, Mox.
Date: August 09, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
What a treat to find this updated...was not expecting that now. Just adorable and sexy and Jim/Kevin? Horrifying yet too funny. Really looking forward to Pam 'demonstrating' her lingerie choices...better than fashion show at lunch any day.
9 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! This is a little more of what I would expect Jim and (mainly from) Pam when they (are probably destined to) fight. I don't want to get into it here, but I was trying to start a discussion about it on the NBC fanfic messageboard thread. But mainly, I needed to see Pam being patient and compassionate and I think you portrayed that. Bravo!! :mwah:
9 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 01:27 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
I was just starting to miss you! Yet another fine chapter. Still very curious...
Date: August 09, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Oh, I'm so glad they're talking again. Love how Jim called Pam "the bravest person he knew."
And Pam? Just so ya know....we wouldn't mind seeing Jim pose in Playgirl either. So maybe you could work on that idea, ok? :)
Thanks for sending us a chapter from "across the pond", Mox!
Date: August 09, 2007 12:53 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Can I just say that possessive cave-man Jim is really hot? Well, I just did.
Also -- how adorable that neither of them can sleep very well without the other -- already. And I'm glad that they came up with a compromise. The man-thread will probably throw something at me, but I'm glad Pam won't pose completely nude.