7 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2009 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Just found this in the archive tonight and settled in for a trip down memory lane. This was very well written, I liked that the break-up was relatively civil, and that the first date seemed very realistic. And I agree with Jim, I love May, too!
8 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2007 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
What's not to love about May? Especially when you're in love and he/she loves you back. Looking forward to a hot summer.
9 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Absolutely love the final three sentences! This is really nicely done.
10 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2007 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. I loved this from beginning to end. The right pitch, true to form and sweet as honey. Thanks.
8 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is a lovely take on that first date. I'm crazy about the last few paragraphs, and I think you really hit your stride in the middle of this chapter. I can't wait for more! --CH
Date: September 20, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
This chapter was really nice. I think it's more true to the characters than the stories where Jim and Pam go straight to the sex part the day of the interview. I like the descriptions and the character interaction. The paragraph formatting makes it a little hard to read, but the story is so worth the effort.