Date: August 22, 2007 10:59 am Title: The Box
ooh. this series was delightful and spot on. i loved it!
Date: August 06, 2007 01:51 pm Title: The Box
What a great way to do little encapsulated portraits of each of these characters. And Jim, of course. Loved Creed calling him 'the tall kid' and re: Karen cluing in - couldn't help thinking of the old saying, 'do I need to show you a picture?' Also, lovely ending - the ring on a shoelace around his neck is such a touching detail and Pam putting her hand over his heart...big aaawww.
Date: August 06, 2007 12:27 pm Title: The Box
Very sweet! Fun reading!
Date: August 06, 2007 09:39 am Title: The Box
So beautiful. Probably the sweetest thing I've read on here! If an engagement happened, I am completely convinced it would happen just like this. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2007 08:33 am Title: The Box
Great. Funny. I like the meandering.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: August 06, 2007 07:13 am Title: The Box
Wow! This was so great! Such an interesting idea. And you really got the different voices down pat. Dwight's chapter, in particular, was so Dwight. And Creed's too. Ryan is such a bastard! The only thing I would say is to fix your formatting so it's easier on the eyes. But, yeah, I really enjoyed this!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I've been trying to fix the formatting, but the story is resisting... I'll keep at it :)
Date: August 06, 2007 06:03 am Title: The Box
“I’ve been calling you Beesly for almost six years now. I’d kind of like it if we could take things in a new direction."
So cute. And such a dork. :) Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: August 06, 2007 05:09 am Title: The Box
Really good. I especially enjoyed the last chapter. I felt that I could see that happening-- a perfect proposal, so sweet.
Author's Response:
That's a great compliment; thank you!
Date: August 06, 2007 04:21 am Title: The Box
I am SUCH a sap for Jam proposals!!! Loved this, BTW.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: August 06, 2007 02:52 am Title: The Box
Awesome little series! The last one's my favorite, of course. That was just adorable. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!