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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 09:46 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Oooh just started this one and I'm loving it already. I love AU stories and can see this working really well. *giggles* I love the name of Angela's show. That's just perfect! And the "Assistant Station Manager"/"Assistant to the Station Manager" thing. Very cute!! Can't wait to see what happens when Jim and Pam meet. =)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 06:14 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

What an awesome idea!  (I know, I'm late to the party for this one.) I love how you kept everyone's character and voice true, just plopped them down in a new work environment.  So funny that Dwight is still the Assistant (to the) Manager and Pam is the board operator.  10 stars for your cleverness and 10 stars for the story, hmm, I don't think I can do 20 stars for a chapter. But I would if I could.

Reviewer: JinRain Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 08:17 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

My two favorite shows combined: Frasier and The Office! LOL! Great job.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2007 10:30 am Title: The Big Guns From Philly

I love this story. love love loveeeeeeeeee it. one million dundies to you. keep on truckin with the awesomeness.

Author's Response: One million Dundies, wow!  Wait, why are they all bowlers? ;)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: faceglow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 06:43 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

I find it hard to tell you off because you gave a little delicious hint of flirting. Cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 06:13 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

So this is pretty much awesome, love the pace and it's hilarious.  But then, I do love your comedy - for instance the Food Network loving drill sargent and "What in the name of Rachel Rey!" (Is that how you spell her last name?)  Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!  And thanks for reading my other stories as well, that's so awesome!  Thanks for reading and stay tuned!

Reviewer: House Calls Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 05:14 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Loving this story, Wendy Blue!  I finally registered here just so I could comment on it.  It's AU, but you've done a great job of capturing the key parts of these transplanted Dunder-Mifflinites, but you've changed it up enough to not make it predictable. 

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so flattered that you would go to that trouble just to review :)  I'm so glad you're enjoying this, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 11:55 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Oooh! What a fun concept! I just found this and am so excited about it, and looking forward to reading all the chapters you have done.
All of their jobs at the station seem so perfect for them. And I just love the continuity, but in a new and very different setting.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for finding this and extra thanks for reading!

Reviewer: stampsgal Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 08:00 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the premise for this story, but I'm hooked!  You've transplanted our favorite people into a completely new setting, and it works great.  You've done a great job with the character voices here.  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 08:57 am Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Makes me happy : )

Author's Response: Yay!  I'm glad :)

Reviewer: bee sly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 12:49 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Well if Toby insists....

I HAD to leave feedback for this amazingly orginal fic! I just love this so far it's completely spot on. Oh how i wish i could wake up to jim every morning..*mind starts to wander* but this is the next best thing. I could totally picture Michael wearing a south park tie.So Pam is now his co-host! YAY!! Will she be the new Dear Abby? Perhaps Dear Pammy?lol...Please update more.. I don't know what else to say besides this fic is so cereal it's captain crunch, and me and the capt'n can make it happen!

lol...If your from the philly area Preston and Steve on WMMR!! GADZOOKS!

 



Author's Response: Well, thank you so much! I love Captain Crunch hehe.  Thanks so much for reading and there's more to come soon!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 07:17 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Very Nice. You did a great job of keeping the characters truly "in character."  Off to chapter 2.

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 10:50 am Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Genius. The characters transfer beautifully.

Author's Response: Thank you!  And thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 08:08 am Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Writer's block, schmiter's block! This is so fun. I can't wait until Jim actually meets the board operator :-)

Author's Response: Hehe, glad you're liking it!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 07:13 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

I always get a little skeptical at the idea of these completely different world AUs, but this somehow managed to feel *so right* and so much like our "Office" even in the very different context. I love how everyone's show is so suited to who they are. And I love Jim getting his first taste of Pam's personality through her drawing :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you feel that way :)  I was nervous taking our beloved characters and putting them in a completely different setting, but I'm happy that to hear that you think I'm doing okay! 

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 05:55 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

"Wake up to Jim every morning, from 6-10, and start your day the right way..."  was it completely obvious that I'd like this part?  And the DM crew could totally be a wacky radio station.  Frightening.  And hilarious.  Kind of like a certain TV show I know...

Author's Response: Yes, it was completely obvious, but totally understandable.  I'm right there with you, sister. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Annabel Winslow Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 05:00 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Wendy Blue!  I never saw this coming, at all.  Fantastic and funny!  You've done a wonderful job with all the voices.  "Clue-phone, it's for you," from Andy is priceless, as is Michael calling Jim "Gigantor" and refusing to remember that Stanley doesn't do an R&B show.  I also like how Jim's already inclined to be friends with Pam before he even meets her.  Well done!

Author's Response:

Thanks Annabel!  I'm really glad you liked this!  I'm relieved to know that you think I'm staying true to the character's voices; it's a tricky thing to do in an AU setting.

Thanks again so much for reading!

Reviewer: Alyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 04:42 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

I really can't wait to read the rest of this!

And hey, don't forget, tomorrow morning, the WYDM family gets a little bigger with the introduction of Jim Halpert in the Morning! Wake up to Jim every morning, from 6-10, and start your day the right way!

This is where I make a joke about how I would love to wake up to Jim every morning, but I'm too tired to manage anykind of double speak or puns.

Alyssa



Author's Response: I threw that in there because, well, who WOULDN'T want to wake up to Jim in the morning?  The breakfast of champions, he is.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BlueJeanBaby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 03:50 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

You had me at 'You Can't Stop The Beet'.  I had a nice hearty laugh for that one.

I'm really excited for this story, it's going to be fun.  What a great way to showcase all the characters.  And so far I can totally hear their voices.   I don't know what else to say except that I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.  



Author's Response:

Haha, his show was just begging to be named that.

And thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 03:49 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

You really got my attention!  What a great idea.  I'm really looking forward to keeping up with this one; it's got great potential. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 03:31 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Oh, I do like this :)  Excited for next chapter...

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad :)  Hehe, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: DayDreamBeliever Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 02:56 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

this is such a great concept!  i cant wait to see where you go with this, this is a fabulous set up with tons of potential!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!  More to come soon!

Reviewer: faceglow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 02:48 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

What a fun idea! Looking forward to more.


Author's Response: Thanks! More to come soon!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 02:41 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

YAY! I am definitely setting my MTT preset to this station!

(Oh, was that the cheesiest thing ever??? :P)

I cannot wait to see what you do with this! Viva la Swifferina! And viva la AU stories! 



Author's Response:

Umm, yep, that was indeed the cheesiest thing ever.  Way to go.

Haha, Mose, you know this wouldn't even be up right now if it weren't for you so a big HOLLA ATCHA BOY for you (yeah, I don't know where that came from).

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