Date: January 27, 2008 09:57 pm Title: The Ultimatum
They made Pam do the show on purpose? Oh that's so good! Haha
7 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 06:16 pm Title: The Ultimatum
I'm glad Andy used his $10 to pay his late fee. As an employee of a video store, that makes me very happy :)
Great job!
Date: August 14, 2007 10:29 am Title: The Ultimatum
That was a great last line by Andy. So him.
And Jim pushing Pam to strive for more is spot on. Awww, they would be great together!
Loving this more and more with each chapter... so glad I started reading it... and cannot wait for an update!
Author's Response: Andy just struck me as the kind of guy that would have Blockbuster late fees :-P Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2007 01:29 pm Title: The Ultimatum
I am really enjoying this story. It's so well written and you've taken the characters we all know and love and put them in an incredibly different setting but it works great. I love it. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: August 13, 2007 01:13 pm Title: The Ultimatum
awesome
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2007 05:50 pm Title: The Ultimatum
this story rocks my socks. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're liking it!
Date: August 12, 2007 08:57 am Title: The Ultimatum
Oh my gosh, this is just too cute for words! What a perfect way for Pam to finally get some confidence! Mmm, dating in the workplace sounds pretty good to me...
Author's Response: Thanks sudzy! And I agree, if there were more Jim Halperts in the world, dating in the workplace would be a very good thing :)
Date: August 12, 2007 08:19 am Title: The Ultimatum
Yay! Pam obviously needed that tough love. And I love Andy in this chapter - for his complete goofiness in the beginning with Ryan, and for coming through in the end.
Author's Response: Thanks Semby! Andy's a fun one to write :) Thanks for reading!
Date: August 12, 2007 07:18 am Title: The Ultimatum
this is still really cute. i was excited when i saw there was an update this morning before i went into work! keep going!
Author's Response: I will! Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2007 06:58 am Title: The Ultimatum
I pretty much want this to continue forever. I'm probably dating myself here, but I always really loved "WKRP in CIncinatti..."
Author's Response: I saw that show!....once. I don't know if I can continue it forever but there's plenty more to come :) Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2007 05:52 am Title: The Ultimatum
SWIFFER!! This was BRILLIANT!!! Really, you just keep on amazing me with every new chapter! And now, let's move on to a new segment in our show, entitled, "Things Mose Loved About This Chapter."
-That Andy's mentoring skills are gleaned from Mastercard commercials.
-That Jim is both confident enough to fight for Pam at this early stage, yet still be kind of awkward and dorky around her off-air.
-That mysteriously locked supply closet. What could be in there? My guess is that nobody should try and find out. The results could be too horrifying to comprehend, and it'd be like that scene in Raiders of the Lost Ark, when everyone's faces melt off.
-Most of all, I loved, loved, LOVED Jim's sneaky way of showing Pam that she had the power within her all along! I mean, who knew that ten bucks to Andy would be akin to Dorothy's ruby slippers, or Dumbo's magic feather?
Again...BRILLIANT chapter. Best so far, and that's saying something, my friend!
Author's Response: Well, the joke I was going for was that the supply closet was "occupied." Oh well, joke didn't land. I know this is way late, but thanks for everything, Mose! P.S. How's that burn doing? :-P
Date: August 12, 2007 05:34 am Title: The Ultimatum
Hmm... I notice there is a supply closet at the station. Niiiiiice. And I notice that Pam seems to be 'fine with her choices', at least with a nudge from Jim. Cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, lisahoo :)
Date: August 12, 2007 02:38 am Title: The Ultimatum
I'll admit it. I was skeptical (you would find that's just in my nature), but you managed to transition these characters into radio work with spot-on accuracy. hee They're all the same characters, it's just a different venue.
I'm really enjoying it, and I can't wait to see Jim and Pam become official co-hosts. :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you feel that I'm making this setting work! It means a lot. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: August 12, 2007 01:26 am Title: The Ultimatum
hee, ultimatum. I love this.
I kind of hate this story, merely on the grounds that I cannot come up with anything to say that makes sense, and usually my reviews are so much better. Oh well - I shall practice, and hopefully for your next chapter I'll come up with something that isn't just i love this so, so, so, so, so much.
Author's Response: Your reviews are just fine! Thanks for reading :)