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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 10:03 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

Haha, loved Jim's conversation with his brother. And I still don't get what's upsetting Pam.

Reviewer: Hotdog Fingers Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

"You mean...Mexicans?"

"Kevin, that's rude...He meant homosexuals."

Oh, that's classic Angela right there! Great job...again!

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2007 06:36 am Title: Risky or Romantic?

I don't always read WIPs and that's usually because I hate having to wait for the next chapter -- like now!  But, ignore my whining.  This is a really interesting story so far.  #1:  I love the concept.  Neat idea for an AU story.  #2:  You have everyone's personalities down really well.  Michael & Andy are particularly hilarious, but really everyone is spot-on.  And #3:  I'm dying to know what happens next!  So, obviously, you've got my attention.  When's the next chapter coming out??

Author's Response: Next chapter is up now!  Thanks so much for reading :)

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

I desperately wanted to write you a review for each chapter, but the truth is, I couldn't tear myself away from the story for that long.  Now that I'm safely and sullenly out of chapters until your next update, I can rave all I want!  I looooooooooooooooooooove this story!  Jim as a DJ?  Lovely.  Board Operator Beesly? Perfect.  Saved By The Bell references?  Heaven!  

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!  I'm really glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2007 07:29 am Title: Risky or Romantic?

giggle giggle giggle.  This is so good.  You continue to bring the funny and I very much appreciate it :) You and Mose are quite the comedy duo!

Author's Response: Well thank you!  We're thinking of taking our show on the road:  Abbot and Costello meets Cirque du Soleil meets Blue Man Group. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 06:53 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

Aw, poor distracted upset Pam. I love the Saved by the Bell scene - hee!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 06:14 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

Let me apologize for not leaving an actual review, but I'm very sick, and not really all here..... "slow train of snickers" HA HA HA HA HA!

OH! and Saved by the Bell - niiiiiice



Author's Response: Gotta love over-acted, cheesy shows from the 90's.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 05:52 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

Yes.  Awesome as usual.  Love the Saved By the Bell reference.  And love the convo btw Jim and Sam.  So great.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

Oh, Pam! How can Jim fight for you if you don't even tell him what's going on!?
And, I love the showdown brewing over Kelly.
Nice work here! Fun stuff.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

Angela -- kinda judgmental!  And Kandy in the making, with a side of Ryan...  I am afraid of you that you write Andy so well.


Author's Response: Okay, you caught me, I'm actually Ed Helms :)  Thanks for reading lisahoo!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

ok, i love this story. i wish your chapters were longer so i could read it for hours on end. haha, but seriously...i hope you write this forever.

Author's Response: Hehe they'll be longer in the future, I promise!  Not sure it can go on for forever, but there's definitely more to come!  Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

Well, I have one criticism for this chapter...it was entirely TOO SHORT! The thing I love about this story is that the characters feel exactly the same as they do on the show. And just like on the show, Jim and Pam just need to talk to each other. Also, I don't know if I've said this already, but I really hope Roy does not make an appearance here!

I loved the Saved By The Bell references! I think Andy is Screech, rather than Ryan. Although Andy would not realize it, so great job! :-)



Author's Response:

I know, it was one of my shorter ones :(  More to come though, I promise! 

Seriously, these kids need a lesson in communication! 

Thanks for reading sudzy!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 12:57 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?

I've got a topic for Jim's next show... "Stories by Swiff: Excellent or just plain 'ol fantastic?" I'm sure there would be a ton of callers for that one. :)

This story just keeps getting better and better. You've really hit your stride with this one, and I couldn't be happier! 



Author's Response: I can't thank you enough for all the support and enthusiasm, Mose!  Who needs a cheering section when you're around :)  Thanks for being the best Mozart to my Butchy Cassidy!

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