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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 10:05 pm Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?

Ohh so that's what Michael said to her. Bleh, that's terrible. I'm so glad Jan fixed it. LOL

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 10:23 pm Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?

Oh, Jan to the rescue! Hopefully. She needs to fix it!
I just love the Jim/Pam chemistry you create. It is so well done!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 03:37 am Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?

Hurray, I trust Jan (pre-mental-breakdown Jan, that is) to resolve this situation! Maybe not smoothly or quickly, but.

The "troublemaker" comment was very cute :)

Reviewer: Hotdog Fingers Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 06:36 pm Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?

National Review Day? Seriously. Cause I'm gullible to believe you, believe me.

Great new chapter, Angela cracks me up everytime. The Pam/Jim moment was very cute.

Reviewer: House Calls Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 12:11 pm Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?

Yayness!  An update!  I caught Cousin Mose's review -- ditto on the 'bringing the funny'.  11 stars out of 10!  And I really enjoy stories were the author captures a) the group dynamic, b) individuals, and c) Michael so well.  Yours does it all.  :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  It really means a lot to me that you liked it so much :)

Reviewer: twentythree Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 09:30 am Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?

I freakin' LOVE this story. I think it's an awesome way to bring the dynamics of the crew to a different envoirment. It's totally flippin' awesome and I reaaaallllly hope you update some more soon. I can't WAIT!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!  I'm really glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 07:40 am Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?

Yay!  More "On the Air"!!!  Did I sense a plan from Jim?  Cannot wait to see what's next!

BTW -- your Andy is scary.  I mean that in the best possible way. 



Author's Response: Hehe, thanks lisahoo!  Andy's such a fun one.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 06:19 am Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?

Woot! You must've sensed the lack of funny these days, because you brought enough for the whole class here! I love the additional stuff in the conference room scene at the end--the "cat fight" among the ladies was perfect.

And what can be said about Andy eyeballing Kelly and singing "Aint too proud to beg?"

Bravo!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for looking the early draft over!  Not enough can be said about how much you've helped during this story :)  Thanks as always my friend!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 05:28 am Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?

YAY! I wish I could just go on the roof and scream out "I love this story!" But then my roommate would find out I read fanfic and that would be disastrous.

Author's Response: That would indeed be disastrous.  It's a sad, lonely life we fanfic readers/authors lead ;).  Thanks so much for reading!

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