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Reviewer: Alyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Concentration

I am ridiculously excited for whatever comes next. "Im not one to judge, but" is perfectly scary Angela. And maybe I've read too much "Girly Girl Truth Or Dare" but Meredith VS. Angela always makes me laugh! Alyssa

 



Author's Response: Haha, thanks, I'd thought it'd be fun to put those two in close proximity.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Concentration

Even in the AU world, Dwight and Angela are hiding their love -- Come out of the closet?  Will Oscar and Kevin be making appearances?



Author's Response: In due time :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 07:17 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Very Nice. You did a great job of keeping the characters truly "in character."  Off to chapter 2.

Reviewer: czarag00 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 12:52 pm Title: Concentration

i like this so far, its fun!

 

<3 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 11:09 am Title: Concentration

Angela and Excel spreadsheets...kinky!

BTW, Pam & Jim are even cute together on the radio  ;o) 



Author's Response:

She's an organized, but saucy little minx.

And if Pam and Jim and radio show together, I would listen religiously :)

Thanks, lisahoo!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 10:56 am Title: Concentration

Yay!  Love it! 

Author's Response: Yay!  Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 10:55 am Title: Concentration

This is really, truly great. Please continue!

Author's Response: Chapter 3 coming up soon!  Thanks for listening!

Reviewer: SixFlightsUp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 10:54 am Title: Concentration

Mmmmm... waking up to the voice of Jim Halpert in the morning... Damn... 

Wow. I'm jealous of a fictional radio listening audience. 

I can't wait to read more!  



Author's Response:

I know, it's a pleasant thought isn't it? *sigh*

Hehe, thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 10:50 am Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Genius. The characters transfer beautifully.

Author's Response: Thank you!  And thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 10:45 am Title: Concentration

Uh...Hello? Yeah. Long time reader, first..no...uh... well, long time reviewer as well. Yeah, anyway, I was just calling in to say that your station totally rocks! WOO! For real. Like, the DJ's are all really cool... and I think that uptight Angela lady is probably pretty hot in real life...but y'know, whatever. 

So anyway, what caller am I? Do I get tickets to Supertramp?

WOO! Yeah! ROCK ON!!!



Author's Response:

Somebody get this bozo off the air please! *click*

Hehe, only kidding of course.  You, my friend, basically get dibs on whatever your little heart desires for helping me so much with A) Talking me out of my writer's block and 2) Being the bestest beta ever.  You. Rock.

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 08:08 am Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Writer's block, schmiter's block! This is so fun. I can't wait until Jim actually meets the board operator :-)

Author's Response: Hehe, glad you're liking it!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 07:13 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

I always get a little skeptical at the idea of these completely different world AUs, but this somehow managed to feel *so right* and so much like our "Office" even in the very different context. I love how everyone's show is so suited to who they are. And I love Jim getting his first taste of Pam's personality through her drawing :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you feel that way :)  I was nervous taking our beloved characters and putting them in a completely different setting, but I'm happy that to hear that you think I'm doing okay! 

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 05:55 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

"Wake up to Jim every morning, from 6-10, and start your day the right way..."  was it completely obvious that I'd like this part?  And the DM crew could totally be a wacky radio station.  Frightening.  And hilarious.  Kind of like a certain TV show I know...

Author's Response: Yes, it was completely obvious, but totally understandable.  I'm right there with you, sister. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Annabel Winslow Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 05:00 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Wendy Blue!  I never saw this coming, at all.  Fantastic and funny!  You've done a wonderful job with all the voices.  "Clue-phone, it's for you," from Andy is priceless, as is Michael calling Jim "Gigantor" and refusing to remember that Stanley doesn't do an R&B show.  I also like how Jim's already inclined to be friends with Pam before he even meets her.  Well done!

Author's Response:

Thanks Annabel!  I'm really glad you liked this!  I'm relieved to know that you think I'm staying true to the character's voices; it's a tricky thing to do in an AU setting.

Thanks again so much for reading!

Reviewer: Alyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 04:42 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

I really can't wait to read the rest of this!

And hey, don't forget, tomorrow morning, the WYDM family gets a little bigger with the introduction of Jim Halpert in the Morning! Wake up to Jim every morning, from 6-10, and start your day the right way!

This is where I make a joke about how I would love to wake up to Jim every morning, but I'm too tired to manage anykind of double speak or puns.

Alyssa



Author's Response: I threw that in there because, well, who WOULDN'T want to wake up to Jim in the morning?  The breakfast of champions, he is.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BlueJeanBaby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 03:50 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

You had me at 'You Can't Stop The Beet'.  I had a nice hearty laugh for that one.

I'm really excited for this story, it's going to be fun.  What a great way to showcase all the characters.  And so far I can totally hear their voices.   I don't know what else to say except that I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.  



Author's Response:

Haha, his show was just begging to be named that.

And thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 03:49 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

You really got my attention!  What a great idea.  I'm really looking forward to keeping up with this one; it's got great potential. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 03:31 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Oh, I do like this :)  Excited for next chapter...

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad :)  Hehe, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: DayDreamBeliever Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 02:56 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

this is such a great concept!  i cant wait to see where you go with this, this is a fabulous set up with tons of potential!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!  More to come soon!

Reviewer: faceglow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 02:48 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

What a fun idea! Looking forward to more.


Author's Response: Thanks! More to come soon!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 02:41 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

YAY! I am definitely setting my MTT preset to this station!

(Oh, was that the cheesiest thing ever??? :P)

I cannot wait to see what you do with this! Viva la Swifferina! And viva la AU stories! 



Author's Response:

Umm, yep, that was indeed the cheesiest thing ever.  Way to go.

Haha, Mose, you know this wouldn't even be up right now if it weren't for you so a big HOLLA ATCHA BOY for you (yeah, I don't know where that came from).

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