8 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 06:38 pm Title: A Word of Advice
Loved the line about Toby! Cruel but funny! And how cool that Pam is going to be Jim's cohost. I love listening to my a.m. radio pair's banter as I drive to work.
7 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 06:36 pm Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?
National Review Day? Seriously. Cause I'm gullible to believe you, believe me.
Great new chapter, Angela cracks me up everytime. The Pam/Jim moment was very cute.
8 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 06:32 pm Title: Concentration
Awesome name for Angela's show! And it never crossed my mind that she was talking about a cat, great twist!
8 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
"You mean...Mexicans?"
"Kevin, that's rude...He meant homosexuals."
Oh, that's classic Angela right there! Great job...again!
7 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 06:16 pm Title: The Ultimatum
I'm glad Andy used his $10 to pay his late fee. As an employee of a video store, that makes me very happy :)
Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 06:14 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly
What an awesome idea! (I know, I'm late to the party for this one.) I love how you kept everyone's character and voice true, just plopped them down in a new work environment. So funny that Dwight is still the Assistant (to the) Manager and Pam is the board operator. 10 stars for your cleverness and 10 stars for the story, hmm, I don't think I can do 20 stars for a chapter. But I would if I could.
9 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 06:12 pm Title: A Word of Advice
Unfortunately, those phone lines are quieter than a woman having sex with Toby.
That was hilarious! (Poor Toby, but still...hilarious!)
Date: September 06, 2007 12:11 pm Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?
Yayness! An update! I caught Cousin Mose's review -- ditto on the 'bringing the funny'. 11 stars out of 10! And I really enjoy stories were the author captures a) the group dynamic, b) individuals, and c) Michael so well. Yours does it all. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me that you liked it so much :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 09:30 am Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?
I freakin' LOVE this story. I think it's an awesome way to bring the dynamics of the crew to a different envoirment. It's totally flippin' awesome and I reaaaallllly hope you update some more soon. I can't WAIT!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
Date: September 06, 2007 07:40 am Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?
Yay! More "On the Air"!!! Did I sense a plan from Jim? Cannot wait to see what's next!
BTW -- your Andy is scary. I mean that in the best possible way.
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks lisahoo! Andy's such a fun one. More to come soon!
Date: September 06, 2007 06:19 am Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?
Woot! You must've sensed the lack of funny these days, because you brought enough for the whole class here! I love the additional stuff in the conference room scene at the end--the "cat fight" among the ladies was perfect.
And what can be said about Andy eyeballing Kelly and singing "Aint too proud to beg?"
Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for looking the early draft over! Not enough can be said about how much you've helped during this story :) Thanks as always my friend!
Date: September 06, 2007 05:28 am Title: Who's Bringing the Mud?
YAY! I wish I could just go on the roof and scream out "I love this story!" But then my roommate would find out I read fanfic and that would be disastrous.
Author's Response: That would indeed be disastrous. It's a sad, lonely life we fanfic readers/authors lead ;). Thanks so much for reading!
Date: September 03, 2007 06:36 am Title: Risky or Romantic?
I don't always read WIPs and that's usually because I hate having to wait for the next chapter -- like now! But, ignore my whining. This is a really interesting story so far. #1: I love the concept. Neat idea for an AU story. #2: You have everyone's personalities down really well. Michael & Andy are particularly hilarious, but really everyone is spot-on. And #3: I'm dying to know what happens next! So, obviously, you've got my attention. When's the next chapter coming out??
Author's Response: Next chapter is up now! Thanks so much for reading :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
I desperately wanted to write you a review for each chapter, but the truth is, I couldn't tear myself away from the story for that long. Now that I'm safely and sullenly out of chapters until your next update, I can rave all I want! I looooooooooooooooooooove this story! Jim as a DJ? Lovely. Board Operator Beesly? Perfect. Saved By The Bell references? Heaven!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: August 23, 2007 07:29 am Title: Risky or Romantic?
giggle giggle giggle. This is so good. You continue to bring the funny and I very much appreciate it :) You and Mose are quite the comedy duo!
Author's Response: Well thank you! We're thinking of taking our show on the road: Abbot and Costello meets Cirque du Soleil meets Blue Man Group. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2007 08:17 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly
My two favorite shows combined: Frasier and The Office! LOL! Great job.
Date: August 22, 2007 06:53 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
Aw, poor distracted upset Pam. I love the Saved by the Bell scene - hee!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Date: August 22, 2007 06:14 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
Let me apologize for not leaving an actual review, but I'm very sick, and not really all here..... "slow train of snickers" HA HA HA HA HA!
OH! and Saved by the Bell - niiiiiice
Author's Response: Gotta love over-acted, cheesy shows from the 90's. Thanks for reading!
Date: August 22, 2007 05:52 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
Yes. Awesome as usual. Love the Saved By the Bell reference. And love the convo btw Jim and Sam. So great.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it!
Date: August 22, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
Oh, Pam! How can Jim fight for you if you don't even tell him what's going on!?
And, I love the showdown brewing over Kelly.
Nice work here! Fun stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!
Date: August 22, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
Angela -- kinda judgmental! And Kandy in the making, with a side of Ryan... I am afraid of you that you write Andy so well.
Author's Response: Okay, you caught me, I'm actually Ed Helms :) Thanks for reading lisahoo!
Date: August 22, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
ok, i love this story. i wish your chapters were longer so i could read it for hours on end. haha, but seriously...i hope you write this forever.
Author's Response: Hehe they'll be longer in the future, I promise! Not sure it can go on for forever, but there's definitely more to come! Thanks for reading :)
Date: August 22, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
Well, I have one criticism for this chapter...it was entirely TOO SHORT! The thing I love about this story is that the characters feel exactly the same as they do on the show. And just like on the show, Jim and Pam just need to talk to each other. Also, I don't know if I've said this already, but I really hope Roy does not make an appearance here!
I loved the Saved By The Bell references! I think Andy is Screech, rather than Ryan. Although Andy would not realize it, so great job! :-)
Author's Response:
I know, it was one of my shorter ones :( More to come though, I promise!
Seriously, these kids need a lesson in communication!
Thanks for reading sudzy!
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2007 12:57 pm Title: Risky or Romantic?
I've got a topic for Jim's next show... "Stories by Swiff: Excellent or just plain 'ol fantastic?" I'm sure there would be a ton of callers for that one. :)
This story just keeps getting better and better. You've really hit your stride with this one, and I couldn't be happier!
Author's Response: I can't thank you enough for all the support and enthusiasm, Mose! Who needs a cheering section when you're around :) Thanks for being the best Mozart to my Butchy Cassidy!
Date: August 20, 2007 10:30 am Title: The Big Guns From Philly
I love this story. love love loveeeeeeeeee it. one million dundies to you. keep on truckin with the awesomeness.
Author's Response: One million Dundies, wow! Wait, why are they all bowlers? ;) Thanks for reading!