Date: August 16, 2007 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
I love that she wears the fashion show outfit! Loved it!
Date: August 15, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
Beautiful scrantonbranch! And so the receptionist saves Jim :)
8 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2007 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
SB, I really like the similarities and the contrast that you showed in Jim and Pam getting ready for the date. It's so appropriate that you named this Chapter "Mirrors", because although they are doing pretty much the same thing and thinking pretty much the same things, they're images are reversed. One is returning to his old self while the other is exploring her newself. I love that!
8 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2007 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
First, congrats on your first fic! I just loved it, being able to see what they were each thinking as they went through the same steps getting ready for their first date. And these lines were my absolute favorite:
"The man he felt return in Wallace’s office was staring back at him in the mirror. It felt good to be back."
"A vibrant and confident woman stared back at her, a woman who was courageous enough to wear red."
Date: August 11, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
Yay scrantonbranch, this is great!! I'm looking forward to seeing how you finish the story!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Mirrors
Yay scrantonbranch! This was beautifully written and your insight into Jim and Pam just shines through in your fiction! I'm off to go read chapter 2!