Reviews For One Step Closer
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Reviewer: BlueJeanBaby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 09:03 am Title: Chapter 2: Waiting

Oh, how cute.  They were both ten minutes early and only moments away from each other.  I also thought it was a nice touch that they both pulled out a sentimental token to pass the time.  

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: Waiting

I love it, sb!

Looking forward to see what this means: Tonight was her chance to love him the way he loved her.   ;-)

Reviewer: officerules06 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 10:09 am Title: Chapter 2: Waiting

yay sb! i'm so glad you're doing this! it's really good. since this one is only 3 chapters, will you maybe do more?

Reviewer: Abigail Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 09:25 am Title: Chapter 2: Waiting

Another excellent chapter.  In the last year, their relationship had been a collage of miscommunication, cold shoulders and pain.  Isn't it the truth!  Can't wait for part 3.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 07:03 am Title: Chapter 2: Waiting

Great job.  I read it with a smile.  Looking forward to the next installment.

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