Date: August 16, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
AWESOME, SB, seriously. I loved every bit of this last chapter. Perfection. Please write more!!!
8 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2007 09:24 am Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
And the old Jim and the new Pam have arrived at their destination of common ground. Well done, SB! I liked a lot of lines in this Chapter, this is one of them: What’s more, she helped him see he didn’t need to fear the man who loved her
This is exactly what happened!
I also love all the 'silent' communication.
Date: August 15, 2007 09:06 am Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
SB, I jumped up and down when I saw that you had written a fanfic! I have so much enjoyed your work on the JP and PD that I knew this would be good.
Nobody gets in the heads of these two like you do (except maybe the writers!). I was glad to see that you have brought back the non-verbal communication that they were so good at. You have stayed true to their characters - their few words meaning so much. I actually teared up reading this. I also loved that Jim still had a "paradox".
What a great read! I hope you find time to do more.
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2007 06:49 am Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
SB, I have goosebumps and butterflies in my stomach after reading that. Perfection! Again, your insight into Pam and Jim's heads comes through crystal clear in your fanfic. I hope you will write more!
Date: August 14, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 3: Arrival
That was gorgeous, sb! What a way you have with language.
I especially enjoyed this part:
The door opened to reveal a radiant Pam standing before Jim. She was beautiful everyday, but this moment literally knocked the breath right out of him. A smile snuck out of the corner of his mouth to accompany his awe filled eyes. He relished the freedom of being able to look at her freely without wondering if she can see into his soul. His eyes literally invited Pam to read every page of his feelings for her.
*sigh*
Thanks for an amazing story.