Date: August 19, 2007 08:43 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II
What a wonderful story. I loved it! Especially this part:
Pam scrunched up her nose and forehead at his words, and he fell a little more in love with her.
Heck, I fell a little more in love with her!
Thanks for a great story.
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your reviews Beeswax. Pam is completely adorable anyway, but for me, it's her facial expressions that put her over the top. They're beyond cute, it's like 1/2 baby panda and 1/2 baby bunny.
Date: August 19, 2007 05:19 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II
Oh, wow, this was so great in so many ways.
Leaving the guy who had spent a week just trying to get her friendship back, so that she could be with the guy who didn’t love her enough to even send her flowers. Wow. Angsty and delicious. And the very essence of the difference between Jim & Roy.
Author's Response: I really felt like that was the essence as well. That she left someone who truly valued her every day, to be with someone who had long since taken her for granted. Thank you for your review lisahoo.
8 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2007 04:12 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II
Really sweet. Good job!
Author's Response: I hope it was, and I'm glad you found it that way. A little angst, but really just a simple, short, and sweet story. Thanks for your review NanReg.
Date: August 18, 2007 11:10 pm Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II
So poignant! Thank God the girl finally woke up, eh?
Author's Response: Thank God indeed. Some never do. Thank you for your review Vampiric Blood, and cool name.
Date: August 18, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II
That was so sweet. Really nice ending to a really nice story. And it fit in so well. :)
Author's Response: I'm really glad you felt it fit in. It's a short story really, but hopefully put together it all makes sense. The only loose string is Pam's picture, but I did that on purpose, because it's supposed to be the picture from "Business School," and therefore Pam would keep it. Thanks for the review desert island.