Reviews For DunderHeads
Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2007 06:38 pm Title: HOMERUN
Author's Response: I don't know what it is about Meredith that compels me to write stories for/about her. Maybe I just have a soft spot for the underdog. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the story, lisahoo, and sorry about the slurpee headache!
Date: August 20, 2007 06:38 pm Title: HOMERUN
Niiiiice. I'm so glad you posted this all at once. Now I have the fanfic equivalent of a 'slurpee headache' from all the yumminess. Just the right amount of Jam mixed in with the dirt of the infield.
I could totally see Meredith being a ringer. Nice twist.
Author's Response: I don't know what it is about Meredith that compels me to write stories for/about her. Maybe I just have a soft spot for the underdog. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the story, lisahoo, and sorry about the slurpee headache!
Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2007 06:06 pm Title: FAIRPLAY
Author's Response: Thanks for picking up those goofs, lisahoo! I have fixed them. I appreciate your attention to detail!
Date: August 20, 2007 06:06 pm Title: FAIRPLAY
a couple of really minor things
Ch 1 -- Oscar and Phyllis were lining up bats against the backstop then you have "And speaking of which, where's Phyllis? She's late."
Ch 3 -- "Pam, honestly!" Jim said in fake exasperation. ... "I'm going to talk to Devon." He strode off. (Devon hasn't arrived yet)
Other than that, I am really enjoying the give and take -- Michael is painfully in character. And I'm liking the details of sweaty Jim in a tight t-shirt. Yum.
Author's Response: Thanks for picking up those goofs, lisahoo! I have fixed them. I appreciate your attention to detail!