1 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2021 07:37 pm Title: Everything
This is so weird and amazing and somehow I can actually see this happening on the show
Date: September 19, 2007 08:53 am Title: Everything
That was so charming and chilling. Really nicely done. I liked the voice you gave Jim and the seamless way you involved the actual events of "The Job".
Author's Response: Thanks, belsum - it was a bit of an imagination stretch, but I'm glad you found it enjoyable. :-)
Date: September 13, 2007 10:34 pm Title: Everything
Awww. There's a song he really wants her to hear!
This was too funny and too cute in one. Nice work, Mox!
Author's Response: and you are too awesome for reviewing, desert island! So glad you liked it!
Date: September 13, 2007 09:07 pm Title: Everything
I had to give him credit. Barry White clearly was not messing around.
I can't tell you how much I love these two sentences! What a great, fun story.
Author's Response: It's true. You don't want to mess around when Barry White tells you do something. ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing, Sweetpea!
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2007 07:32 pm Title: Everything
Awesome job, Moxie : )
Author's Response: and awesome review, Nan! Thanks so much. :)
Date: September 13, 2007 07:05 pm Title: Everything
Woot! The demolition derby! I have a little motif of my very own!!!
Of course Karen doesn't understand Michael. He almost as big a factor in the failure of that relationship as Pam was.
"Did I really think I'd stop missing her if I left again? It hadn't worked so well the last time I tried." SO F-ING TRUE!!! Wake the hell up, Halpert!
I think I am going to need to buy some Barry White... nicely done, Miss Moxie!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I was writing that line and the DD just jumped in of its own accord. See? Jim does think of you. :-)
So glad you liked it, Lisa!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2007 04:33 pm Title: Everything
Oh I just loved this. Quirky and funny and just right. You're so good at this, Moxie I swear.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, kells!! I really appreciate you taking the time to review!!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2007 04:29 pm Title: Everything
Wonderful. Just wonderful.
Author's Response: How kind to say - thank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Everything
This is a fun, poignant look into the mind of our Jim Halpert during the events leading up to his decision to go for it with Pam. This is really great, Mox. I will never look at or listen to Barry White the same way again ;)
Author's Response: Thanks - it's fun to play in Jim's mind. ;-)