1 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2020 04:14 pm Title: Jim and Karen in the Art Barn
This is a great use of the ensemble, and a good illustration of Jim and Pam's connection even at this really difficult time in their relationship.
8 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Jim and Karen in the Art Barn
Great job with Jim and Pam's banter in this chapter - sounded just like them - and with Karen's disdain for the art - sounded just like her, too. And how sweet that Jim managed to get her the mirrors...
Date: October 23, 2007 03:49 pm Title: Jim and Karen in the Art Barn
this story was really great ! i can't begin to tell you how much i loved it
i'm sad to see it's overr ! but it was great !
Date: October 23, 2007 01:51 pm Title: Jim and Karen in the Art Barn
Aww, that was so heartbreaking - but so true to character! I'm so happy there's a next chapter ;)
9 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 08:04 am Title: Jim and Karen in the Art Barn
Oh...wow! This chapter was a tour-de-force of awesomnosity! (Yeah, it'll be a word one day).
You captured all these little vignettes so wonderfully, it felt like watching an actual episode. I loved Jim and Pam's conversation about the mirrors (I won both a Def Leppard AND a Trans Am mirror when I was a kid.), and Creed in the hay caused me to snort out loud. :)
I guess my only wish would have been to see a little more of the Winnebago trip, but then, this story was about being at the fair, not on a road trip. :)
Off to read the next chapter!
Date: August 31, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Jim and Karen in the Art Barn
Blue Blast - everyone's favorite...flavor? Color? Insecticide?
"Pig muck or Dwight breath." Please, muggins, could there be a door number 3?
I love the little section with Angela, Phyllis, and Pam. Pam's so nice there. 'Pig jokes'? Priceless.
Little typo: "I don't thinks so"
The Mime act is a staple when Michael travels with the troupe? Wonderful.
The 'wanna win me a...' part is so very good and true to life...angsty! I like the different 'names' of the games.
Ryan's excuses...he's got them for every occasion, I guess.
Phyllis tricking Angela into the tilt-a-whirl? Fun. But I hope Angela doesn't throw up on her...
I think you're missing a to in: "Pam was the last person to return the office"
Andy didn't make it back to the bus, but Dwight did? Creed's statement reminded me of his story of the fight in The Negotiation...fun.
So Jim couldn't help but get the mirrors for Pam. That's sweet. I had to look up Bob Ross. Now that I did, I got what Karen was saying. Wow, Karen just doesn't mesh here, does she?
Do we have another chapter with Jim and Pam taking the kids? They have a lot of kids, because they never did use those condoms.
Date: August 31, 2007 02:47 pm Title: Jim and Karen in the Art Barn
Glad to see more Muggins! Pretty good county fair for not having a demolition derby. And Pam's apartment will look so good with those mirrors ;o) She can put them on her ceiling so she & Jim can watch themselves...
Date: August 30, 2007 10:49 pm Title: Jim and Karen in the Art Barn
You are brilliant - honestly. Every voice is so perfect, and the scenario you've put the entire office in here is such a good opportunity for using them all the way you do. I think my favorite thing was when Ryan rattled off all those excuses why he wasn't gonig on the ferris wheel with Kelly - that moment on the show with Jim is my fave Ryan moment (which for me are few and far between. lol)...also, the dynamic you've got going with the differences between Pam and Karen is right on! Brava!