10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 07:07 pm Title: Evening
I thought this was a really interesting take on a possible future of this relationship. The roles the couple takes on and how difficult it can be. I liked Pam wondering if Jim was also getting used to things. For jim, it seems this is just the natural progression, but Pam always needs that extra time to adjust to the change and I thought you illustrated that well.
Author's Response: i like that you mention roles - i think that's a huge part of what people use in their day-to-day dealings. admittedly, this was an early fic of mine, but i had a blast working on it. i just wanted to create something that showed their deep flaws and i hope this accomplished that.
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2007 12:20 am Title: Morning
This was really, really good - I'm personally of the opinion that Jim and Pam would make great parents, but that doesn't mean perfect parents, which is why I really liked this.
Author's Response: thanks! i'm so glad you liked it. i agree with you about the kind of parents they might be. they are, after all, human. plus it's far more interesting than an argument about who will buy the diapers. so... thanks for your comments.
Date: August 28, 2007 09:22 pm Title: Morning
::sigh:: if only. What a perfect day for them...and for us!
Author's Response: Thanks! I wrote this out of order - the first section was actually written last, so I think a lot more meaning was placed into that first part. Hope you enjoyed the rest of it.