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Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 12:21 pm Title: It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres

This is such a completely believable backstory for Angela.  I am looking forward to seeing where this is going.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. I was interested in the idea that Angela is the way that she is because of something that happened to her. Not just...because she is. So, that's what I tried to do. Thanks for the review Pamela Beesley.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 08:52 am Title: It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres

I can see that as believable back story for Angela.  Good job!


Author's Response: I'm glad that you thought so. It's as I said, kinda radical, but I thought it might be interesting and it was something that I hadn't seen before. Thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 12:05 pm Title: It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres

Wow -- you have really laid out an extensive back story for Angela.  And I like that she is thinking about trusting Pam (a little).  Keep it coming! (That's what she said, but not Angela)


Author's Response: Haha, that's true Angela would never say that. I'd never really seen a back story for Angela before, or at least one I could remember (I'm sure there have been ones) so I thought it might be interesting to invent one. She is going to have to trust Pam a little, much in the same way she did when Dwight left, to get what she wants from Dwight. Thanks for the review lisahoo.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 08:42 pm Title: It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres

Very interesting take on Angela Martin — I like it!  I like how you examine the different types of fears she has:  fears of inadequacy, of trust, of being alone.  Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you. I think a lot of people have a lot of those issues anyway, but they seem very overt in Angela. I'm glad you liked my take on her, I know its pretty "different" but I hope it was interesting. Thank you for the review Vampiric Blood.

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