1 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2022 10:55 pm Title: Memories
Okay, well, these are heartbreaking, but very sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 02:28 pm Title: Memories
That was very poignant...she's literally lost without Jim. Beautiful.
--Strider
Date: November 23, 2007 05:54 pm Title: Memories
Aw, how sad! I would have liked the "in each other's arms" option also, but this is more realistic, isn't it? I'm glad you stuck to your guns and did it the way you planned.
Date: November 15, 2007 07:55 pm Title: Memories
Oh Larry. You make me so sad. But in a good way. Is that possible? Anyway this is really sweet. And I liked Michael's chapter too. Actually I liked them all. Basically you're awesome and I'm really glad you've killed everyone now so you can stop killing people and start writing happier things.
Date: November 15, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Memories
Utter perfection. I am now bawling, and I just now figured out that I might be an old romantic sap. That yogurt lid bit really got me. Beautiful. And I'm not even a JAMer.
8 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 12:09 pm Title: Memories
Wonderful touch to have Pam clutching a yogurt lid. Even though they didn't die together, maybe they'll be buried together? (I found out while doing pre-planning for my Mother with Alzheimers that you can stack 2 people in 1 grave.)
Date: November 14, 2007 03:15 pm Title: Memories
Ahhhhh!!!! I thought you were going to have them live long enough so that they could take special medicine that would make them live forever!
Oh, well, what you wrote was heartbreakingly beautiful. They're together in heaven now pranking God.
Date: November 14, 2007 11:40 am Title: Memories
Aww... she remembered enough. Now I'm tearing up and I'm out of the good kind of kleenex (the kind with the lotion).
I blame you Larry. And don't think I don't know who is still left.
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 10:45 am Title: Memories
Yay! They're finally dead!
*please note my sarcasm* Heh...
Lar, you know that I enjoy this and I look forward to the ending... it's the Rapture, right? For Michael? ;)
Date: November 14, 2007 10:28 am Title: Memories
I have really enjoyed this, but reading Jim and Pam's death literally made me cry....it was heartbreaking....GOOD JOB!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 10:17 am Title: Memories
There goes my eyeliner....ugh!
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 10:16 am Title: Memories
sooooooooooooooooooooooo sad... ok that was as drawn out as i felt my heart drop through to my stomach. but i do like that she barely remembers, clutching the yogurt lid after she passes on. nice touch :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 09:52 am Title: Memories
I thought this was extremely fitting of the two of them. Really good job.
Date: November 14, 2007 09:27 am Title: Memories
Aw Larry you're on a role this week. A yogurt lid, really? So sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 09:26 am Title: Memories
A perfect ending for Pam. I just know that true love holds on, no matter what, and she was able to have that one last tie to Jim. I'm so glad they went close together, so neither was alone for very long in either life.
Now, please excuse me while I go get a tissue. :)
Date: November 14, 2007 09:25 am Title: Memories
not Pam Halpert? I'm too sad to say anything else. except that it appeals to my heart and I love it. the yogurt lid!!! :'(
Author's Response: Of course Pam Halpert! That was my mistake and it has now been fixed. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 14, 2007 09:25 am Title: Memories
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww