10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 02:50 pm Title: Kevin
Very funny! Great visual.
--Strider
Date: January 30, 2008 11:02 pm Title: Kevin
Wow...M&Ms and Baileys...that actually sounds really good. I'm trying that the next time I'm drunk. LOL
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Kevin
hahaha augustus tuna! i am lol'ing all over the place. well played.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. Who doesn't love a good Willy Wonka reference? I appreciate the review waltisafox.
Date: September 19, 2007 05:26 pm Title: Kevin
Jim covered in chocolate....yumm. That's definitely a win-win-wow!
Author's Response: Haha, I wish I had more than 55 words to describe it, but I hope the image came through okay. Thanks for the review kaystar.
Date: September 17, 2007 11:38 am Title: Kevin
Andy!!! Oh, I love Andy. His comment about Tuna falling into the chocloate river was brilliant, loved it!
Author's Response: As soon as I realized it was going to involve chocolate, I knew that I had to include Andy, and let him have the last line. He's all about not falling in the chocolate river. Thanks for the review firthgal.
Date: September 17, 2007 05:54 am Title: Kevin
lol! I love Kevin drunk! That'd be sooo funny.
Author's Response: I think it would be. If him singing "You Oughta Know" from ABC is any indication. Thanks for the review Snoznoodle.
Date: September 16, 2007 09:06 am Title: Kevin
LOL! Excellent.
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the review invis.
Date: September 16, 2007 05:05 am Title: Kevin
In 55 words or less, you've managed to capture the tone of these characters. This chapter by far had me laughing out loud so much so that my husband had to ask me what was wrong. He thought I was choking. Excellent work. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Haha, well I'm glad that you liked it and found it funny. 55 words is definitely a challenge to get the characters right, but it's a lot of fun to try. Thanks for the great review PamWannaBe.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Kevin
AAHH! The chocolate river!!! Too funny!
Author's Response: Dawesome! I know, I had a whole different ending which just involved Kevin and Jim. Because it's kinda hard to have too many people in 55 words, but as soon as I typed chocolate, I knew Andy Bernard had to be involved somehow. In retrospect, maybe I should have had him sing the last line. Oh well. Thanks for the review lisahoo.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:25 pm Title: Kevin
hmmm.... blended m&ms.... hmm... with the cover on, and some ice cream (not alcohol) in it.... sounds like it could be yummy...
Author's Response: I agree. Though I'm not sure if it would be too soupy. Hm....I might have to go conduct an experiment. Thanks for the review EmilyHalpert.
Date: September 15, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Kevin
Hahaha. These are really well done and much more thought out and insightful than the average 55 word fic. I am officially loving these!
Author's Response: That's very kind of you to say. I really like the 55 word format, its challenging, but also you're freer to use different ideas. Thanks for the review desert island.