Date: October 22, 2018 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ohmygosh, I so totally LOVE this! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time because I never knew what was going to happen next --- I LOVE being surprised at every turn! And oh, so very sweet! This has not been reviewed in over 8 years, but I hope you read this because it made me COMPLETELY happy! :)
Date: July 23, 2010 07:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Kieyra, I adore this story, and I don't know how I never read it before! It's perfect, so perfect. Not even sure if you'll see this, but I had to let you know just in case.
Date: November 21, 2006 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
I adore this! Oh my god, so sweet. If only this were the case *sigh*
Great work! :D
Date: September 26, 2006 10:14 am Title: Chapter 2
Yay for sneakyPam! And I love the imagery of this line:
You turn over in bed, and finally chase that single, warm memory down into sleep.
Date: September 24, 2006 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
"The look says: Right now? You have to admit I'm fabulous."
Pam DOES have that look! Haha, this was awesome!
Date: September 23, 2006 03:28 am Title: Chapter 2
I must say, I never saw THAT coming. It was such a great chapter. Well written, and you are very good at building up the tension as it went on. Awesome!
Date: September 22, 2006 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was just so utterly sweet. Great ending :)
Date: September 22, 2006 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so glad you added the second chapter. I love second-person fics (when well-done, which this one was), and this was just so sweet, and so in-character for both of them...
Date: September 22, 2006 11:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Loved loved loved this-you have their voices so well and I love that it was all awkwardness and uncertainty for a while. You captured what could really be Jim-Pam dialogue so well. Also love that you have her showing up at the airport in the end, it made me grin :)
Date: September 22, 2006 08:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooh, I've read the first chapter before, but I'm loving the second chapter even more! I love that Pam showed up at the airport to surprise him at the end. Sweet.
Lovely story!
Date: September 21, 2006 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
So adorable! I love the idea of Pam taking a huge step like that, to match his.
Date: September 21, 2006 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
What a wonderful ending to a beautiful story. It made my heart smile.
Date: September 21, 2006 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
If I had my druthers, this would be exactly how it happened. Exactly--down to the very last word.
Sweet and real and happy without forgeting all the many, many complications. This was just lovely.
Date: September 21, 2006 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great ending. I didn't think she was gonna show up on the plane. Great job.