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Reviewer: hann Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2009 12:29 pm Title: 7:00 PM

Please, please, please finish this! I just read it all in one sitting (while I probably should have been working) and I didn't want it to end! Especially on a cliff hanger like that!!! Please update soon, pretty please!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2009 09:22 am Title: 7:00 PM

ahh!!! it's what we've been waiting for all day! yay! i can't wait to see how you finish this :)

Reviewer: foreverdreaming Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2009 11:30 am Title: 7:00 PM

It in no way makes up for the absence because, hello? Taunting cliff-hangery-ness!

However, it was a lovely chapter. Especially loved this:

she knows that I don’t just mean physically tired, but the kind of exhaustion that comes with the last game of the season. You’ve rooted for your team, cheered and screamed and booed when things didn’t go their way, but your support wasn’t enough to bring them to victory. Except this time, you’ve had enough, and you won’t be back next season.

Poor Jim. But, yay, she's tired too!

Hope senior year isn't kicking your ass so much that the next chapter is months away, heh.

Reviewer: foreverdreaming Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2009 11:30 am Title: 7:00 PM

It in no way makes up for the absence because, hello? Taunting cliff-hangery-ness!

However, it was a lovely chapter. Especially loved this:

she knows that I don’t just mean physically tired, but the kind of exhaustion that comes with the last game of the season. You’ve rooted for your team, cheered and screamed and booed when things didn’t go their way, but your support wasn’t enough to bring them to victory. Except this time, you’ve had enough, and you won’t be back next season.

Poor Jim. But, yay, she's tired too!

Hope senior year isn't kicking your ass so much that the next chapter is months away, heh.

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2009 05:53 pm Title: 7:00 PM

Just read this again from the beginning, and it's simply fantastic. You're just completely inside Jim's mind and you've got his voice down so perfectly. Like this: And even though it’s a coward move, I don’t wait to see her let herself back into the life she’s settled for. And this: My mind briefly wonders how she’s going to explain it to Roy, if he notices, if she’ll tell the truth, whatever the hell that may be.

Can't wait to see how you wrap it up. :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it the second time around :) (TWSS?)

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2009 05:12 pm Title: 7:00 PM

*contended sigh*

Oh man, the joy at finding this gem updated? Great, friend - the joy was great!

This chapter was just as real and fantastic as all those that preceded it, and boy did I smile when Pam returned. Just...yay. YAY.

I'm glad I didn't have to use the pout on you. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks friend! So so glad you enjoyed it. Yay indeed! Thanks for all the support :)

Reviewer: cheezy316 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2009 11:28 am Title: 7:00 PM

it definitely makes up for your absence!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2009 09:54 am Title: 7:00 PM

OMFG!  This does make up for the absence if Hour 24 is coming sometime soon(ish).  I liked this hour of wandering through Jim's brain.  Nicely done, WB. 

Senior year is tough on a girl.  Stay strong.



Author's Response: Well thank you! It will come soon(ish). Thanks for hanging in there!

Reviewer: luchy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2009 08:14 am Title: 7:00 PM

What a great update!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 10:02 pm Title: 7:00 PM

I was so happy to see you updated this story.  You really ran the table with my emotions with this one.  I absolutely can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! More to come soon!

Reviewer: Elle Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 08:43 pm Title: 7:00 PM

That was just lovely. Absolutely lovely. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: spyprof Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 07:00 pm Title: 7:00 PM

I have read a number of Office fanfics, but this is the first time I have been prompted to review, which meant I had to register, et al... Anyway, I loved this story thus far! I can't wait to see it's conclusion tick tick tick (that's my 24 clock impersonation)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for taking the time to do all that just to review, it means a lot :) Last chapter coming soon (hopefully)!

Reviewer: okayibelieveyou Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 06:37 pm Title: 7:00 PM

Ahhh yay! Pretty please with some JAM on top post the last chapter!!!!!!!!
(Sorry for the completely idiotic review. This was wonderful! Can't wait for the resolution.)

Author's Response: Thank you! Last chapter to come soon(ish) :)

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 04:34 pm Title: 7:00 PM

Yay!!!  Yay!!!  Yay!!!

I cannot TELL you how happy I was to see One Day at the top of the Most Recent list!  You did not disappoint!  Finally, a bare left hand!  This last hour is gonna be a gangbuster!

And good luck with the school stuff.



Author's Response: Aww yay! Glad the chapter came through for you, especially after such a long hiatus. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: uglyscientist Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 04:04 pm Title: 7:00 PM

okay, ummm...i'm going to need the last chapter, like, right now. please.

Author's Response: Can't give that to you right at this moment, but it's hopefully coming soon!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 02:33 pm Title: 7:00 PM

Wow. What a chapter.  First I was sad when they were at Rite Aid, then I was nervous when they were at Pam's house as I was afraid Roy would confront them, then I went back to sad and ended up very, very happy. Great ending to the 7:00 hour. It gave me goose bumps. Can't wait to see what 8pm brings....

Author's Response: It's definitely a rollercoaster, no doubt about it :) Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 02:06 pm Title: 7:00 PM

I was just wondering about this story the other day! Thanks for the great update!

Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 02:03 pm Title: 7:00 PM

Yay, yay, yay!  You saw the bat signal, Wendy, and here you are with such an excellent, excellent chapter.  I was feeling so sad (because I got sucked right back into the sweet melancholy again), and Pam shows up at the door.  *sigh*  So great.

Author's Response: I did indeed! I can't thank you guys enough for your patience and still leaving such kick ass reviews :) More to come (hopefully) soon!

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 01:58 pm Title: 7:00 PM

Yippeee!!!!!!!! I'd almost given up on a update, but hadn't deleted this story off my favorites. And what do I find when I get home from work? Oh, I most definitely enjoyed! What a beautifully written chapter.

 

 



Author's Response: Yay! Glad it was a nice after-work treat :) Thank you so much for reading and sticking with this story!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 01:41 pm Title: 7:00 PM

And just like that, we who are reading this let out a similar breath that we've been holding in for a long time. :D

I've already told you this before, but it's worth repeating here in an official capacity. This is one of your strongest chapters, full of rich language, imagery, and insight. Now, please don't keep us waiting for the last hour, kthnxbai. :D



Author's Response: Many thanks again, friend!  And thank you for looking it over! I didn't mention that in my notes, did I?  Darn it!  Well, again, thank you :) Your support, as always, means so much!

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