Date: July 07, 2009 06:04 pm Title: 10:00 PM
to sad about jim straight out telling pam he's leaving, and then her being okay with it to review. wahhhh. crying. wahhh. i'll review later...
Date: October 01, 2007 10:01 pm Title: 10:00 PM
wow, great date so far...on to the next chapt.
Date: October 01, 2007 09:37 pm Title: 10:00 PM
wow, great date so far...on to the next chapt.
Date: September 19, 2007 04:48 am Title: 10:00 PM
The thing about self-imposed exiles is that they're very, very lonely. Also, one tends to miss out on things like this. And I just couldn't stay away any longer, because this story is just so fantastic! Really, prouder of you I could not be. :)
Oh, and this line right here? "We're just two friends saying goodbye the only way we know how." Wow. That's really good. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Mose :) It's been quite strange not having you around but I hope that the time you're taking for yourself is helping. Thanks for the support, as always!
Date: September 18, 2007 11:09 pm Title: 10:00 PM
Awww... holding hands.
I love this for many reasons, one being because it is told from Jim's perspective, in first person. It is a fun point of view, and seems very Jim so far. Nice job!
Author's Response: Glad to hear that I'm staying true to our favorite shaggy-haired paper salesman :) Thanks for reading!
Date: September 18, 2007 12:35 pm Title: 10:00 PM
Great! Just the the TV show '24', you give us a little tease of the next hour!
P.S. This is great. I cannot wait to see more of this. Or the premiere, so I can see Pam & Jim together for realsies.
Author's Response: Amen, sister. At least this gives me something to do so I don't go crazy waiting for the premiere (8 more days!!!!) Thanks for reading as always!
Date: September 18, 2007 09:08 am Title: 10:00 PM
Oohh, I'm loving it so far. This was my favorite part:
But she’s full of surprises tonight and gingerly takes mine in her own. And with a gentle tug, she’s walking beside me instead of following behind.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: More is on the way! Thanks for reading!
Date: September 18, 2007 06:58 am Title: 10:00 PM
This is such a great idea! You're so good at the banter, it feels so natural. I always wish your chapters were longer! One thing though, I think in the deleted scenes for Casino Night, Jim says his charity is the Lackawanna County Volunteer Sherrifs. But, Habitat for Humanity works, too! Can't wait for another hour :-)
Author's Response: Oh man, sudzy with the details! You are absolutely right, I forgot about that. I just pictured Jim being all burly and manly and building houses and...well you know :) Thanks so much for reading and there's more to come soon!
Date: September 18, 2007 05:40 am Title: 10:00 PM
Can't wait. So good.
Author's Response: More to come soon. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 18, 2007 05:40 am Title: 10:00 PM
i love this so much. they're really precious and i can see the two of them going this route if he hadn't said those 5 wonderful words. but i can also see how this is just gonna make things even more stressful for their relationship. i hope you take this in a good direction :) i can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: It will definitely be an interesting day, I can tell you that :) Thanks so much for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 05:17 am Title: 10:00 PM
"Coincidence? Nothing's coincidence." (Damn right I quoted AWTR) This story is pretty much awesome. I've been waiting for a story that had Jim just admit he was leaving rather than the whole love thing. Really enjoying this!
Author's Response: Umm, I love that movie :) So glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 04:31 am Title: 10:00 PM
I love this. I love this line:
We're just two friends saying goodbye the only way we know how.
This has so much potential - I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I've basically got Chapter 3 done so hopefully that will be up within the next day or so. Thanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 12:05 am Title: 10:00 PM
This is totally awesome! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More to come soon!
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2007 11:44 pm Title: 10:00 PM
review 24? maybe? LOVE this story. love it. can't wait to read their next hour, seems very exciting.
Author's Response: Yes! You are lucky review #24! Want to know what your prize is? A new chapter sometime in the very near future :D Thanks for reading!