Date: May 12, 2008 07:56 pm Title: 11:00 PM
this is very cute. the tension is unbearable
Date: September 20, 2007 05:08 pm Title: 11:00 PM
LOVE it!
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for reading!
Date: September 20, 2007 05:14 am Title: 11:00 PM
Wendy, I spent many happy hours at the baseball field with my Dad and my older brother when I was little, so this just felt perfect to me. Of course, Jim would want to take her there. It's heartbreaking how much he wants her to be part of his life and I love how you having them dancing around the line that they both know is there but aren't prepared to completly jump over - yet!
...and I realize that this is what keeps me going. Not just tonight, but for the countless hours spent trudging through a dead-end job. She’s all the motivation I need, and it’s terrifying to think of moving on without that.
Beautiful angst.
Author's Response: Thanks so much sweetpea! I'm glad I could bring back good memories for you in this little fic o' mine :) Thanks for reading!
Date: September 19, 2007 03:20 pm Title: 11:00 PM
Think nothing of it, just keep these chapters keep coming!!! -CH
Author's Response: Will do :) Thanks CH!
Date: September 19, 2007 01:26 pm Title: 11:00 PM
okay, maybe that’s a little excessive. Excessive, but adorable.
“Maybe you’ll meet some cute Connecticut girl.” Ouch. Ok, Pam, where to?
Author's Response: We'll find out soon! Thanks for reading!
Date: September 19, 2007 01:04 pm Title: 11:00 PM
I cannot wait for this story to continue. What an original idea!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! More to come soon!
Date: September 19, 2007 12:33 pm Title: 11:00 PM
See, you keep producing chapters like this, and you're going to force me out of exile permanently! Not that I'd complain, mind you... :)
That last line is fantastic. So much symbolism there. I am loving this story!
Author's Response: Thanks Mose! And if chapters are what it takes to bring you back then chapters it is :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2007 11:48 am Title: 11:00 PM
Okay, I love every single bit of this! I love that Jim has planned imaginary dates (not just first dates, either!) with Pam. I love Pam being willing to climb the fence in her dress and the image of Jim helping her over. Continued excellent work and I cannot wait to see what happens after midnight ;)
Author's Response: The wee hours of the morning are coming up soon :) Thanks for reading!
Date: September 19, 2007 10:10 am Title: 11:00 PM
*sigh* there's so much good about this chapter! the fence, the fact that he's always wanted to take her there, Pam being honest about the fact that she hates Katy? hilarious. i really love the way you capture their emotions and lay them out without flourish, but with just enough fluffyness to be perfect :) (does that make any sense? i guess i'm in awe)
Author's Response: Okay I'm really glad you liked the whole Katy part, because I was a little unsure of it. Good to know you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading :)