Date: July 07, 2009 06:24 pm Title: 2:00 AM
okay, you've got me hooked here. nice job on your part, there! i'll keep reading with a now less critical angle! (not that i ever was)
Date: October 12, 2007 08:20 am Title: 2:00 AM
Wow! I'm really sorry I didn't review this earlier! I am so in love with story because it seems so real. It's making me just as anxious as I was on the show, wondering what's going to happen next and how close they're going to get. I seriously love this story so please do not give up and update really really soon. I mean now! lol.
9 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2007 10:01 pm Title: 2:00 AM
Ack, NO! I want more!! What are they up to next??
Date: September 30, 2007 11:33 pm Title: 2:00 AM
I just read all six chapters of this, and when I got to the bottom and didn't see a "Next" link I literally said, "Noooooo!"
I'm in love with this story. Please, please, please update soon. My stomach is in knots. I absolutely love your premise. Where are they going next?!!?!
Date: September 30, 2007 09:25 pm Title: 2:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait for your next update :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2007 05:39 pm Title: 2:00 AM
I'm just dying to know what happens next! I also have to say I much prefer this to the Kiefer Sutherland version...
Date: September 30, 2007 01:49 pm Title: 2:00 AM
Just found this and I'm REALLY enjoying it so far...what a great idea!
Date: September 30, 2007 01:26 pm Title: 2:00 AM
i liked it. its a lot different than the other chapters, imo. but i did enjoy it!
Date: September 30, 2007 12:53 pm Title: 2:00 AM
You didn't blow it at all! Good job.
Date: September 30, 2007 12:26 pm Title: 2:00 AM
I loved that you threw that into a dream... it was one of THE things from CN that you can't ignore. Good job. Please continue.
me
Date: September 30, 2007 12:22 pm Title: 2:00 AM
Loved it! The dream sequence was realistic. I liked that it was a bit weird and jumbly. I think if you had made Jim dream the exact scene as it happened, it would have been strange. I liked that it just had a tiny bit of the actual Casino Night feel. Keep going this is great!
Date: September 30, 2007 11:09 am Title: 2:00 AM
There is no need for tomatoes! you did a great job with it. The dream did feel pretty real. I was wondering how you'd get through these late night hours w/o them sleeping. Pam on a caffeine high should be pretty darn entertaining. can't wait!
Date: September 30, 2007 10:35 am Title: 2:00 AM
AWESOME!!! Please continue! I'm curious to see whether they end up together!!
Date: September 30, 2007 09:12 am Title: 2:00 AM
Ooh, I was wondering if the 'Pam at Jim's desk on the phone' scene was going to make an appearance in this AU. I like how this amps up Jim's nervousness and inner turmoil. Can't wait to see where this leads.
Date: September 30, 2007 07:50 am Title: 2:00 AM
Oh, Swiff... that was FANASTIC! No, I don't think I'll be grabbing the tomatoes, unless it's to make them into a tasty marinara sauce for the Italian dinner I feel I should make you as a way of saying "thanks" for such a great chapter! :)
I had no doubts whatsoever that you'd safely navigate these two kids in a realistic and believable fashion through these uneasy and unsure wee small hours of the morning, and this chapter is proof that you're doing that in your usual brilliant way. Bravo!!
Date: September 30, 2007 07:09 am Title: 2:00 AM
“Damn. You’re a little hardcore right now, Beesly.” Hahaha. Awe-some.
Date: September 30, 2007 06:37 am Title: 2:00 AM
You're doing a great job with this story, Wendy. I was a little out of breath by the end of the dream too. Love how Pam just takes charge of the coffeemaker, and chugs it down black. Guess she really, really wants to stay awake, hee.
Can't wait to see where our heroes are off to next!
Date: September 30, 2007 05:28 am Title: 2:00 AM
Absolutely loved this. You did a great job with Jim's dream...I felt that panicky feeling of not being able to move or talk and all the images flying at him...really nicely done. And it looks like FNB's in charge now! Look out, Jim!
Date: September 30, 2007 04:53 am Title: 2:00 AM
I'm saving the tomatoes for my sandwich later. ;) Loved what you did with the dream - very vivid, and I loved the lengthy, run-on sentences - it made it seem much more like it was a trail of subconscious thought. Great job!
And I was mildly worried about how you'd end the movie in less than an hour, but perfect! You made them sleep! And let them be adorable over coffee! You win, Wendy Blue, you win.
Can't wait for the next hour. :D Or ultimately perhaps I just can't wait for some Jim/Pam!kiss-goodness.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2007 03:04 am Title: 2:00 AM
I finally sat down and read this story just now. I've been meaning to FOREVER. And it's quite excellent, and I'm enjoying it a lot - even the dream sequence. ;)
Looking forward to the next part!