Date: July 07, 2009 06:43 pm Title: 5:00 AM
nice jim outburst there! it's almost dinner, so i'll cramp in a much reading as possible, with sadly hardly any reviews.
10 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2009 03:38 pm Title: 5:00 AM
I wonder if they have sunrises as good as these in Connecticut. I wonder if they’re better when she’s next to me.
that is an absolutely brilliant line.
it sounds like it's from some cutesy song that i would probably listen to on Repeat in iTunes for hours.
Date: October 27, 2007 04:29 pm Title: 5:00 AM
“You have to say ‘with my little eye.’”
“Pretty sure that's not an official rule .”
“Do it!” She demands, slapping me lightly on the elbow. She’s lucky she’s cute.
This is a perfect little exchange! I can hear both their voices and see Pam's grin. So good.
Another great chapter! Love Jim's heartfelt speech and Pam's "I don't mind." I can't wait for them to get to Stamford!
Date: October 26, 2007 11:52 pm Title: 5:00 AM
"She's lucky she's cute." I love that line for some reason. Probably because I'm sure that's what Jim thinks about Pam about a lot of things.
It's still awesome! I'm always so happy when I see the next chapter is up! I LOVE this story!
Date: October 26, 2007 01:25 pm Title: 5:00 AM
i applaud your research. way to keep up the continuity. i also applaud your awesomeness b/c this story is so good. i love his honesty here. and i love her happiness. this is so sweet :)
Date: October 26, 2007 11:12 am Title: 5:00 AM
Fabulous! There's nothing like being trapped in a car to promote honesty - can't wait for the next hour ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 11:03 am Title: 5:00 AM
This is great! Love it. Very cute. Very JimPam.
May sound a bit weird, but I really like how we're in his head. I can actually imagine being him in those moments, the tension, what he's feeling.. blah blah blah :P. Very nice. Great story!
10 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 11:00 am Title: 5:00 AM
Such a good chapter! Can't wait for more!
Date: October 26, 2007 07:32 am Title: 5:00 AM
I love this story. Will you please update it right now? K, thanks.
Oh, by the way, just so you know... In Psychology we talked about the sleep cycle. People are most tired around the 3s and 4s of the day and most alert in the 9-11s. Just thought that might be helpful for your story!
Date: October 26, 2007 07:09 am Title: 5:00 AM
Even if it doesn't take an hour, you have all the creative licensing you need. That was great, as always. Really sweet and honest.
Date: October 26, 2007 06:43 am Title: 5:00 AM
PERFECT. You took this chapter in exactly the right direction, and I think you're laying the groundwork for some really important scenes to come. And I can't wait to see what you do with it all. :)
And congratulations on being the first person to ever write a "Jim gives a speech to Pam about his feelings" moment that sounded 100% true to character! For once, Jim doesn't sound like he's writing a term paper for Emo Studies 1050. :-P
Bravo, Swiff... bravo!
9 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 06:42 am Title: 5:00 AM
ROCK ON, SWAY!!! ROCK ON!!!
"Because it's you and me..." Guh. You slay me. And it's wonderful!!! -CH