10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 10:31 am Title: 6:00 AM
Wow, this is amazing. This is an alternate universe I'd have loved to see played out. Very good. Very, very, very good. So good. Amazing, even. Wow. keep going - I can't wait for the rest!!!!
Date: October 31, 2007 09:06 pm Title: 6:00 AM
whatever! Pam totally heard what he said! you're gonna come back to that right? i like this chapter a lot! he's gonna tell her!!!
Date: October 31, 2007 12:11 pm Title: 6:00 AM
Oh my gosh, i am in love with this story! I love the idea of Jim telling her that he was transfering and seeing where it goes from there. And I love that he's semi-aware that Pam "has feelings too".
I loved Jim pretending that Pam was his girlfriend. So cute! Oh Jim, how can you break my heart when you're not even real?
Fabulous job! I can't wait for the next installment!
Date: October 31, 2007 10:39 am Title: 6:00 AM
LOVE this fic!
Date: October 31, 2007 09:45 am Title: 6:00 AM
Aww... house hunting with the Mrs.! How adorable is that?
P.S. TELL HER, JIM!!! TELL HER!
Date: October 31, 2007 09:35 am Title: 6:00 AM
More, please... Like now.
Date: October 31, 2007 08:08 am Title: 6:00 AM
Thank god there is still like 15 more hours to this story. I'm going to be so sad when it's over. Unless it ends in a way I might like. IF you know what I mean.
Date: October 31, 2007 07:03 am Title: 6:00 AM
Aww I'm loving this!
I don't know if I want her to have heard or not.. .but I have a sneaky feeling she has. :P It may sound a bit weird that he's calling her his girlfriend, but also so obvious that he likes her. Which could work both ways. :)
Brilliant chapter! Looking forward to an update!
Date: October 31, 2007 06:16 am Title: 6:00 AM
Another triumph! This chapter was just what you needed at this point--a chance for Jim to try and sort out a few things in his mind. Also, I've always said that Sleepy!Pam is the cutest Pam of all the Pams. :)
Also, there's so many wonderful little gems in this chapter, such as "watching my future approach at 75 MPH," or how Jim realizes that his circular thinking now comes with an expiration date.
But I think my favorite moment was when Jim told the cop that Pam was his girlfriend and he thought "damned if it didn't feel good to call her that."
This story has me wondering if it's possible for you to actually write something that's NOT excellent! I'm thinking....no. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 05:58 am Title: 6:00 AM
Eeeee!! Did Pam hear Jim refer to her as his girlfriend?
Date: October 31, 2007 04:29 am Title: 6:00 AM
I start to question my motives for even applying for the transfer in the first place, because the more I think about it, the more I realize that I’ve never actually pictured myself going there. To be honest, I wanted to see her reaction. I thought maybe she’d call my bluff, or beg me not to go, or maybe tell me the one thing I’ve always wanted to hear. And just like that, I would stay.
I've always thought this was a big part of Jim's motivation for the transfer, Wendy, and you described it perfectly. And what do you mean, "time flies"? Jesus, you can't update fast enough for me!
Date: October 30, 2007 10:32 pm Title: 6:00 AM
Aww man do I love this story. I love how the first impressions of Pam is that she's precious. Cos it's true, she's totally gorgeous... lol. And that they're married! I'd probably think that too if I saw them. PLEASE update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 10:26 pm Title: 6:00 AM
I love this story, can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Date: October 30, 2007 10:15 pm Title: 6:00 AM
Nice.
You delivered this beautifully, and I'm oh-so proud and impressed with what you've done here. Bravo, bravo, dear SHWOP!!!