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Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2008 09:37 pm Title: 12:00 PM

They have so little time left, and now Pam's gone and they've wasted an hour. I like that this gave Jim the chance to say what's in his heart interspersed with his anger, fear and worry.

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2008 04:36 am Title: 12:00 PM

I LOVED the format but poor Jim!  And EVIL you for leaving us like this!  His messages - wow.  You are really, really good at writing Jim, Wendy, but COME ON!  </Andy>  Clock's ticking and I need another update!

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 02:48 pm Title: 12:00 PM

Awww poor Jim!!! I hope Pam isn't on her way back to Scranton and that instead she's at one of the apartments imagining her life with Jim there and making him sweat it out for the fun of it ....update soon!!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 08:03 am Title: 12:00 PM

Big, BIG Yay--but I'm still hungry...

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 04:47 am Title: 12:00 PM

A big 'ol YAY from me, as you know! I love the range of emotions that Jim goes through with these messages. I can hear the frustration, the trying-to-gloss-everything-over-with-humor, and even the anger in his voice. 

Great job, my friend! 

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 07:42 pm Title: 12:00 PM

Cool format. I like it a lot. I'm such a fan of this story, and it's a real treat to see that you're updating. I'm beering you lots of strength and energy so you can keep the updates coming as you get back at it at school.

Please say Pam isn't going back to Scranton. *crosses fingers*  Bravo, SHWOP!!!! --GMMBBG

Reviewer: JamesMichael Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 06:32 pm Title: 12:00 PM

Really good story, enjoying the whole idea immensely. Disappointed at how short the chapter was though, although the format was smart. Who am I to complain really... KEEP EM' COMING!!!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading!  I know, I was sorry about the chapter length too, but no way of avoiding it unfortunately.  Glad you still liked it though!  More to come soon!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 06:18 pm Title: 12:00 PM

Oh sweet Jeebus, Wendy -- ratchet the tension up a few more notches, why dontcha?

I think this level of frantic is exactly how Jim would sound, BTW. 



Author's Response: Aww, lisahoo, thank you so much!  Frantic!Jim was a lot of fun to write, I won't lie.  Less tension will be coming soon (twss) and thanks so much for your consistent reading :)

Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 06:11 pm Title: 12:00 PM

I am so glad this story is back!! Hope the next chapter is up soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will do my best; there's that pesky school thing getting in the way :)  But more to come soon, thanks for reading!

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