Date: January 16, 2008 02:49 pm Title: 1:00 PM
too late, i already hate you. GAHHHH ! cliffhanger much ?!?! ehh, but besides this, i really liked this chapter (: mmmm, paranoid jim. gotta love him !
8 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2008 07:09 pm Title: 1:00 PM
My face is mopey too as I keep one eye on the clock knowing that their 24 hours are about to run out..... I'm so glad that Pam came back. I bet death by fork in the neck is painful and messy.
7 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2008 07:00 pm Title: 1:00 PM
As you know, SHWOP, you've slain me with another cliffhanger, but I'll fight to survive so I can see how this kickass story ends!!!!
More, more, more, please! --CH
10 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2008 06:50 am Title: 1:00 PM
Whew! I actually don't hate you because at least she came back--assuming that's Pam who walked in... There had better be another update soon, missy, or there will be hell to pay!
9 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2008 06:20 am Title: 1:00 PM
I loved the interaction with the sister in this chapter. You've created a fantastically kind, yet quick-witted gem of a character here. Personally I'd love to see more of her, but I realize there are JAMmy-er things to get too! :)
Great job as always! I can't wait for more!!
Date: January 15, 2008 05:13 am Title: 1:00 PM
I won't hate you if updates are coming. Yay! They're talking! That's a good start!
8 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2008 05:03 am Title: 1:00 PM
I don't hate you... well maybe just a little - but in a good way. This was another good chapter, but I'm missing the Jam interaction. Roll on 2:00!
Date: January 15, 2008 04:46 am Title: 1:00 PM
Swiffer! Are you KIDDING me??!? I wake up to find an update! WOO HOO!! :D
Now, why in the world would anyone in their right mind hate you for this chapter? It was great! Love Jim's observations of the other patrons contrasted with his own sense of confusion and patheticness. :D And, call me crazy, but I like to think that Jim saw himself in the old guy--if only for a split second or two. I don't know. Maybe it was the way he thought about "routine" and "tradition." Anyway, it was a nice touch.
But the highlight of this chapter was Jim's conversation with his sister. I adored that she answered the phone "What did you do?" as if it was the most common thing in the world. Made me laugh to beat the band, in the parlance of our times. :D
Anyway, I'd really like to know what happens next, so, if you don't mind??...
Date: January 15, 2008 12:02 am Title: 1:00 PM
update more NOW thanks. I totally thought you were gonna end it like this. And then I was going to jump into the story and stab myself with Jim's fork. Maybe after kissing him. And a cup of coffee.
But that's besides the point. Update!! it's great.
Date: January 14, 2008 10:47 pm Title: 1:00 PM
Ah! This is wonderful and awesome and made me just as giddy when it ended as when I saw it had been updated.
Author's Response: Well, that's good to hear! I was afraid I'd be shunned once it ended at the cliffhanger; glad that wasn't the case! Thanks for reading!
Date: January 14, 2008 10:08 pm Title: 1:00 PM
As soon as I saw this nonsense: 1:59, I thought "damn you, Wendy Blue! Just when I was all wrapped up in the JAMmy goodness you end the chapter!" And then I felt bad because you knew everyone was going to say that since you felt the need to include: Please don't hate me.
in the end notes. And you know what? I so totally don't hate you :P Keep truckin'!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for the mercy, secondrink! I know it's terrible of me, but I promise to bring lots of JAM interaction in the next chapter. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2008 09:52 pm Title: 1:00 PM
I hate you, you told me not to, but how could you leave it there!!! Your killing me!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry! The next chapter will redeem me, I promise! Thanks anyway for reading :)