Date: July 09, 2009 05:38 pm Title: 4:00 PM
you are definitely not shunned. in fact this chapter was my new favorite. they are steadily getting better in my opinion, nice job with that.
i'm so glad you got pam to be serious and tell the truth to jim for once. seriously make a decision about HER life, and figure out if roy is really the right person for her. and all in one day. without futher ado... the next chapter...
10 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2008 04:24 pm Title: 4:00 PM
I went back and started reading this over again and this part killed me:
I shrug innocently. “Okay, I’ll stop.” And I do. I stop work on her hand move up her bare arm to the back of her neck, my fingers doing what I wish my lips could.
Author's Response: Heh, that was my intention :) If only, huh?
Date: May 17, 2008 02:04 pm Title: 4:00 PM
Un-shun. Amazing!! We're finally getting somewhere!! Cannot wait till they stop the car...maybe Pam wants to do more than have a little chat???
Date: May 14, 2008 07:56 am Title: 4:00 PM
i think i'll definitely forgive you for taking so long since it's amazing. i did not see that coming! it's good that all the back and forth crap is stopping and they're being honest. i like it :) more updates soon please?
9 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2008 08:26 pm Title: 4:00 PM
Eeeeeee! You posted! I gasped with excitement when I found out the great news! :-)
Seriously, thank you for making a really crappy night better...loved it, the tension, the humor, the curveball (Pam did WHAT?!) all of it!
Seriously, nice job, and I will never stop reading this as long as you keep posting!
Date: May 13, 2008 02:18 pm Title: 4:00 PM
I was so excited to see you had updated! I watch this every day in my favorites. I re-read the last chapter to familiarize myself with what had happened last and, oh my, how nice it was to get back in their "lives" again with this wonderful chapter. I can't remember when I first started reading this, but every chapter has been well worth the wait and although I hope your next update is sooner, I read it even if it's later. No shunning here. :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2008 08:48 am Title: 4:00 PM
More more more! I hadn't read this until after ch. 20 was written and I was completely engrossed! I love the added dimension of Pam realizing her "pattern." Can't wait to see more chapters!
Date: May 12, 2008 07:38 pm Title: 4:00 PM
Oh, YES! Pam is finally waking up! Please hurry with 5:00!
Date: May 12, 2008 05:33 pm Title: 4:00 PM
I didn't forget about the story, but just how great it is kind of faded a little, so I had to reread 3:00 to catch myself back up. So good and 4:00 is even better. You made me count on my fingers to see how many hours we have left, but that's kind of irrelevant. If you took away the premise of this story it would still be a really good story. You greased the wheel, now keep going. Please?
Author's Response: Yeah, long updates will make you do that :/ But so glad you are still enjoying it. And I will be sure to keep going! :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2008 04:54 pm Title: 4:00 PM
SWIFF!! Are you KIDDING me??!!? How over the moon happy am I to see this back up on the top of the update page where it belongs? :)
Okay, let's just get to the laundry list of awesome things about this chapter:
1. "Do you always use that much tongue?" - SMORT. I've always loved that line. I'm glad you kept it.
2. "I love this new game we're playing." Me too. :D
3. The whole "curling pinkies around each other" thing. *barfs rainbows of happiness* (Seriously, though, it's a fantastic and subtle image that reverberates so loudly).
4. "I just... kind of want to get out of this car." Oh, the urgency... ;)
Once again, a triumph! Could not be happier about this update. Let's keep the momentum going, shall we? Okay, good.
Author's Response: Mose laundry lists are the best laundry lists of all the laundry lists :) Couldn't have done this chapter without you, my friend! Goodness knows I had trouble getting it going, but with your awesome support, it's finally here. As always, you rock :)
Date: May 12, 2008 04:49 pm Title: 4:00 PM
As if you were ever shunned, Wendy : ) You can't ditch me that easily. I'm loving this story more than ever because of little tidbits like this: “Do you blame me?” There’s a darkness to my voice that should surprise us both, but after all that’s happened today, I don’t think much surprises us anymore. Even still, the slow shake of her head, and all the implications it holds, is enough to send chills all along my back. Yowza.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter, it was a fun one for me to write, that's for sure :) And thanks for the non-shunning!
9 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2008 04:37 pm Title: 4:00 PM
So glad to see you updated this - and what a great chapter! I just loved it, and there were so many great lines:
"What would we say anyway? So, do you always use that much tongue?"
"Cardigans and turtlenecks discarded on the floor along with reason and logic."
"As in those kisses we just shared were nothing more than the next stitch in the pattern she’s woven for herself in two instances of unfaithfulness."
Author's Response: Thanks! It makes me happy to know that it was a good one, especially after such a long wait. Thanks for reading!
Date: May 12, 2008 04:32 pm Title: 4:00 PM
Ok, you're not shunned as long as it doesn't take another month for an update. Also, great chapter. Not just in the 'turning the corner' between Jim & Pam, but for having them do that in a plausible way.
Even though it’s wreaking major havoc on my nerves, I love this new game we’re playing. Like now that we’ve crossed the most dangerous threshold, and there’s no going back, we might as well enjoy it. Wow. Just, wow. That is just delicious.
Author's Response: Scout's honor, I'll have another update before then :) So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: May 12, 2008 04:21 pm Title: 4:00 PM
OK, I haven't even READ this yet but I just have to post that I am so excited that you finally posted the next hour, Wendy Blue! I just took a quick look before leaving for choir practice to see if there was anything new. I can't wait to get home in a few hours!!!!
Thank you! Will post again after I actually read the new chapter!
Author's Response: Well thanks for taking the time to review, especially without even reading it! :) Hope it's worth it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2008 03:53 pm Title: 4:00 PM
Please don't leave us hanging. Pure torture!! I'm still reading and waiting ... I've loved this concept all along. Take teh time you need to create your masterpiece, but no more prolonged delays, okay?? Okay. *Unshun*
Author's Response: Thank goodness, no shunning! :) I appreciate you still sticking with this and I promise the delays won't be any longer than absolutely necessary.