Reviews For Cold Openings
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Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2008 10:58 am Title: Eyes Wide Shut

The quarters "subplot" is what made this one.  It was such a perfect Dwight derailment.

Author's Response: lol.. thanks! Actually, that's my favorite part, too.

Reviewer: MintChocolateChip Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2008 10:42 pm Title: Eyes Wide Shut

So happy! Honest to God, I thought to myself, "I sure am in the mood for another kgreene cold opener..." and there one was! Loved it, loved it. Though I am not sure about the Rain Man reference - Michael seems immature and a bit socially clueless at times...well...maybe that does fall under the autism spectrum...Again, I say: you write dialogue to perfection, to absolute perfection. Dare I say better than the actual writers?? I can really see the faces to match the scene - to a point where I am getting slightly confused sometimes. (real episode, or kgreene fanfic?)

Author's Response: Wow, that's high praise! Thank you! And it's funny you should mention that about the Rain Man comparison. I felt that it was kinda a stretch for Carol to think that initially but the more I thought about Michael the more I could see someone saying " Wow... this kinda makes me think of him in a way." It's not spot on for sure and there is exaggeration in the comparison but I thought it was funny enough to get away with. Thanks for bringing that up, that is a worthy point to discuss.

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2008 05:57 pm Title: Eyes Wide Shut

I love your cold opens. So cute.


--I'll give you ten bucks in quarters
if you go talk to him for me.

--Make it twenty and you have a deal.


Now that is awesome. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2008 05:49 pm Title: Eyes Wide Shut

*dies laughing*

Too bad Michael doesn't watch Judge Judy.

Author's Response: lol..That Michael is something, isn't he?

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2008 02:36 pm Title: Eyes Wide Shut

I felt like I was in the room, K : )  Ouch.  Definitely not my underwear...

Author's Response: LOL... Uh oh... How many Rain Man references have I just bought myself? lol.. Thanks Nan!

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