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Reviewer: Angryhaiku Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2007 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Your vindictive Kelly is such a thing of beauty. I love her, and I want her to watch her rip Ryan to shreds. Her arc is so concise and eloquent, and I love that she understands exactly how to manipulate poor, unsuspecting (?) Karen. I love that Kelly knows it's wrong and kind of likes that and kind of doesn't; it's so nuanced and lovely. This story is arresting and deeply innovative. Well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love vindictive Kelly, and I hope she'll get some sort of revenge out of Ryan. If he bothers to remember that they ever dated to begin with (!)

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2007 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow very interesting.  I liked it alot.  Psychologically fascinating.

Author's Response: Well I am enrolled in psychology this year... I probably owe it to that. Thank you so much!

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