1 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2022 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
"Kelly wasn’t sure she’d ever forgive her for that, but it was how she’d learned it was better to be smart but act dumb than be dumb and act smart." I love your take on Kelly (and also Karen's uber-rational devastation), but this was especially insightful I thought.
Date: September 27, 2007 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your vindictive Kelly is such a thing of beauty. I love her, and I want her to watch her rip Ryan to shreds. Her arc is so concise and eloquent, and I love that she understands exactly how to manipulate poor, unsuspecting (?) Karen. I love that Kelly knows it's wrong and kind of likes that and kind of doesn't; it's so nuanced and lovely. This story is arresting and deeply innovative. Well done.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love vindictive Kelly, and I hope she'll get some sort of revenge out of Ryan. If he bothers to remember that they ever dated to begin with (!)
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow very interesting. I liked it alot. Psychologically fascinating.
Author's Response: Well I am enrolled in psychology this year... I probably owe it to that. Thank you so much!