I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.   Just one little note - some of the dialogue doesn't sound like somthing they would say like "It will be fun" instead of "It'll be fun".  Not a big deal, but I thought I'd mention it.  Love the story idea.  Keep writing...please?

Author's Response:

i will keep that in mindd!!!

i wrote it so quickly that i didn't look for those little important details. thank you for mentioning that !

and thank you for the superrrr graciouss feedback. it means a LOTT !