7 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 08:31 pm Title: His Days
nice job... I read it quickly, thinking I'd zip on to the next story, but found myself re-reading and pondering that last line!
Author's Response:
I'm glad it made you ponder a little. Me too :-) Thank you.
7 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 07:38 pm Title: His Days
Congrats on your first fic! As I read it I felt happy because I so love Jim/Pam fluff - but when I got to the last 3 words I felt a bit concerned. I guess needing more than that could be a positive (i.e. getting married) but my scarred from S3 brain automatically read it as something bad. So another 55 word chapter to let us know what direction this is heading would be good.....
Author's Response: I love the happiness too, so even if it doesn't seem so be going in that direction, it would have to eventually. Thanks!
Date: October 27, 2007 07:12 pm Title: His Days
I liked this. The last six words were very interesting. I hope you continue with that and resolve it. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment, and for the challenge to keep it going. I'm thinking about that....