10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 04:49 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
very interesting idea, i love it! more more more :)
Author's Response:
thank you thank you thank you (x hahaa!
i have written the next chapter and i'm going to wait until tomorrow to put it up (:
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 06:04 am Title: Back to Yesterday
This is freakin' awesome! Keep it up!
Author's Response: that made me smile! thank you so much (:
Date: October 30, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
"At that moment, he wanted nothing more then to be with the curly haired receptionst that used to be his best friend."
how cute
great story!
Author's Response: thank you so much ! it meas a lot (: the next chapter may be up sometime todayy
Date: October 30, 2007 07:18 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
I was so excited to see this chapter up. I can't wait to see the Present stuff. I don't remember the book exactly, but doesn't the ghost show what other people are doing? I to read about what Jim sees when he visits 'present' Pam.
Keep the christmas stuff coming.
Author's Response:
yess it does (:
in the book, Present takes scrooge to all of the people that are spending christmas happily, like the cratchit familiy or his cousin fred. but scrooge doesn't find happiness in it so the ghost shows him some sad stuff.
thank you so much for everythign you have helped me with and said (: it has really helped me feel more confident about my fanfic.
8 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
I think this chapter turned out great! It did everything it should have - the Ghost of Christmas Past showed Jim enough that he finally admitted that he still had feelings for her.
However, I think you meant to say Ghost of Christmas PAST here "The Spirit of Christmas Present was suddenly gone"
PS Hope you feel better soon!!
Author's Response:
OOPS! haha, i need to go back and fix that right now (:
thank you for those kind words! it is really nice to know that you are supporting the way i am taking this.
I'm glad you enjoy it!
Date: October 30, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
Great chapter, once again! Just FYI, i think you're typing "know" instead of "now"
Author's Response:
haha, i just noticed that too and i'm preparing to fix somethings.
i always think i have it edited, but as soon as i post it and read it again i see somethings that can be added and changed.
i just wrote some new paragraphs in the end if you would like to take a look at it (x
thank you so much for your reviews (: