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Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 03:15 pm Title: 8:15 AM

Shass!  So happy you're back.  I've missed you and your wonderful work.  Loving this so far (of course) and looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kindness! Working on making this as realistic as I can...

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 10:40 am Title: 8:15 AM

Ooh, S2 Jam smut?  Lovin' it and favoriting this. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! *Curtsy*

Reviewer: annagirl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 09:47 am Title: 8:15 AM

okay, seriously though, this was fucking hot. i need more. if you don't write more, it will make me really really sad.

Author's Response: Don't be sad! Don't be Sad! More is coming!

Reviewer: nandance Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 09:14 am Title: 8:15 AM

Oh wow this story is hot! This is pretty awesome, please continue!



Author's Response: Thanks! Hang on, it might be bumpy ride...

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 08:47 am Title: 8:15 AM

That was hot. I always love some Jam trash to brighten my day. Can't wait for the next chapter.


Author's Response: Dude, I LIVE for Jam trash!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 08:05 am Title: 8:15 AM

Wow. I absolutely love this cannot wait for the next chapter. Sometimes I like a little escapism with a steamy fic, but I don't expect it to be in character. Somehow, even though this is incredibly steamy, it still feels like Jim and Pam. 

I thought that this descriptive part was so real and so visual:

 My knees give out and I crumple to the floor at her feet, my hand captive in hers, my fingers on fire, my head bowed against her knees, still shaking back and forth in denial of this. She lays her hand on my head, gently gripping my hair, pushing my head back to look at my face.

I just loved that image. And when Michael comes in, even he is perfectly in character! Really, really good job. I love it.

Question: Around what episode is this supposed to take place? Not that it matters. Just wondering.

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm thinking it's right after Drug Testing. That's when Jim finally realizes that he's gone for good. That's probably the point at which he stopped sleeping and eating...

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 07:17 am Title: 8:15 AM

Oh man. You're BACK! I was so excited to see your name on a new story and then I read it. I can't wait for more. I love tortured, needy Jim and you've captured that perfectly.

Author's Response: Dude, I've been buried. What's more, I'm sitting there desperately trying to work on my Nanowrimo piece and I just CAN'T! All I want is to write tortured JAM trash. Sigh. Sorry about dropping out on you there, but I really don't know what my life is going to be like from week to week. I'm freelance, so it's highly unpredictable. Thanks for the kindness, as usual. You rock. I've been absolutely LOVING "Observer Effect!"

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 06:46 am Title: 8:15 AM

That's hot.
More please...
Like, kind of now-ish

Author's Response: Working on it! Thanks!

Reviewer: bee sly Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 05:13 am Title: 8:15 AM

YOU MUST CONTINUE!

I'm off to a cold shower....



Author's Response: Thanks! You just wait! It's gonna get steamier...

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