1 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2018 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great. So well done and so many emotions but still perfectly in canon. Really great.
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2007 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1
i love the way that you spliced this up to get into every part. it really worked... loved it. thanks!
Date: November 16, 2007 07:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey. This is a great little story. I really like what you've done with the merger storyline. Thanks for writing this.
Date: November 15, 2007 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very well done. The emotions are all there and written so convincingly. That parking lot scene just breaks my heart, and you took me right back there(but in a good way). Excellent work.
Date: November 15, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is really well done. So much emotion and I really felt both of them agonizing. So many great insights, but I loved Jim thinking that they were never friends, he was just the poor sadsack in love with her. Heartbreaking.
9 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
"some things only get real if you say them at loud."
so true. so true. so many things left unsaid in the show...and revisited in your story. beautifully enunciated :)
8 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2007 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yikes! One year and all the happy S4 episodes later and your story still managed to hit me in the angst bone. I loved Pam and Jim's thoughts as they were talking in the parking lot. Very well done.
Date: November 15, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That was just wow. That scene was so hard for me to watch, yet I watched it over and over. I almost did again, just the other day. You got their thoughts and feelings down perfectly. It was like I was there all over again, only better. This was gut-wrenching in the best way. I've often wondered how Jim's evening went after that convo. Thanks for giving me some insight.