1 [Report This]Date: December 08, 2020 10:25 am Title: But holding ourselves back
This chapter and the next two just crackle. It always amazes me how one's life can turn on a dime every time it happens, and how long it takes to clean up the destruction.
Date: December 10, 2007 01:08 pm Title: But holding ourselves back
WOW. intense ! keep writing, i love it !
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2007 12:59 pm Title: But holding ourselves back
She could feel the intensity of his gaze deepen, and she knew they were treading into dangerous waters. She could see in his eyes so clearly what this meant to him, and it frightened her. Not because she didn’t feel it too, but because she did. She didn’t know how to deal with all of the emotions that flooded her when he looked at her like that. It was all just so there, filling the space between them faster and faster every second. She knew she had to lighten the mood, bring the focus back to the cookies, or the chicken or something, but she couldn’t force the words from her mouth.
Love that paragraph. Sums up season 2 pam/jim interaction so absolutely perfectly.
What a cliffhanger though! Can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! I'm so glad you liked it. Yeah, sorry about that cliffhanger, just felt right to end it there...gotta keep you coming back somehow! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2007 10:08 am Title: But holding ourselves back
ahhhh! so good! more please!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it...I'm hoping to get more up sometime soon (I promise, no 3 week delay like last time...) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2007 06:11 am Title: But holding ourselves back
I hope it's soon! I can't wait! Great chapter. Loved the surprise ending. You did such a good job moving from fun to tense. Good luck with finals!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. This chapter was especially hard to get right, so it's good to hear that you like it. Thanks again for your lovely comments, and I'll try to post again soon!
Date: December 10, 2007 04:37 am Title: But holding ourselves back
Not a fun place to end, my friend.... Cute Chapter, loved it. I don't even have any constructive criticism, and that's like my forte, so.... Good luck on finals. Write another chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, I figured a little cliffhanger might be kinda fun. :) Thanks for the well-wishes...hopefully I get sick of studying and turn to fanfic as my solace...chances are pretty high... Thanks for your review, I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far!