Date: January 07, 2008 07:47 pm Title: I was saved by grace but destroyed by naivety
Yet suddenly, she was met with the startling realization that she cared more about the fact that she had quite possibly ruined her friendship with Jim, than the idea that she had ruined her ten year relationship with Roy.
I love this, and the way you've so clearly described Pam as she realizes her own true feelings for Jim. I like the angst; it shows the depth of their emotions. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review JAMtastic! I'm glad Pam's realization came off as realistic to you. I must admit, I was a little concerned it might be a bit off, so it's really comforting to hear that you liked it. Thanks again so much for reading and reviewing!! :)
Date: January 07, 2008 03:55 pm Title: I was saved by grace but destroyed by naivety
this was perfect :) even though im not a big fan of angst... it was bearable :) keep it up !
Author's Response: Haha, glad I could provide you with "bearable angst". ;) Thanks for the encouragement! I'm glad you're enjoying this so far!
9 [Report This]Date: January 07, 2008 06:16 am Title: I was saved by grace but destroyed by naivety
SO good. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I find it really difficult to write angst like this (I guess I'm more of a fluff kinda gal), so I'm glad it comes off okay. Thanks for sticking with this NanReg, it really means a lot. :)