Date: November 26, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story. If these were real people and not a TV show, this may have been more how the breakup occurred and there would be that time in between before Jim would approach Pam. And I could see Pam deep down feeling somewhat guilty because she likes Karen as a person, but doesn't like her with Jim.
Date: November 25, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
"There was something wrong about letting Karen spend fifty dollars on tequila on the night she got dumped for reasons, Pam was pretty sure, that had more to do with her than with Karen ..."
Poor Karen. But this break-up was better than being left crying near a fountain in NY. Well done!