Date: November 27, 2007 02:11 pm Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
I just love the idea of the mockumentary being an actual documentary. And, I love how spot on you are about passive Pammy here in the beginning. Can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm just totally intrigued by the premise that in this world, the documentary is real and it will have to have some impact at some point.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 10:52 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
Wow! Awesome plot! More please! ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it!
Date: November 27, 2007 09:13 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
I love your stories. They always feel so spot on about with everything. Very excited to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I hope I don't disappoint!
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 08:44 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
This is a great idea for a fic...I'll be waiting patiently for an update, by hitting refresh every 15 minutes.... :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. While I don't know if I can have something ready in 15 minutes, I do hope to update sometime today.
Date: November 27, 2007 08:20 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
I always love your stories!! And I'm so glad you started a new one. this one is so orignial and amazing so far.
I literally LOL'd at the "coloring classes"
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much. You know, I feel good having started a story I'm excited about too. I hope you enjoy this one.
Date: November 27, 2007 07:50 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
Ooh! Great stuff! I'm looking forward to how this pans out. It's got a really great opener! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like where this goes.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 07:26 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
verrrrry interesting premise, i'm excited to see where it goes, but now that you've started a new story, i'm sad that i'll be on vacation all next week.
Author's Response: Have fun on your vacation and thanks for your review! Hopefully I'll have a few chapters waiting for you when you return.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 05:54 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
oooo! this was so good! a great first chapter! can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review and I hope you like where it goes next.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 05:42 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
Wow. What a great set-up. How do you always manage to come up with fresh ideas? I love the scenarios you concoct! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I have to be honest, I'm so afraid this is going to turn into Observer Effect just in Season 2 and with a website instead of a chatroom. I have some ideas as to how to keep it fresh, though. Thanks so much for your encouragement.
Date: November 27, 2007 05:31 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
Wow. Very cool perspective. I like it. More please!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll do my best to get more posted as soon as I can.
Date: November 27, 2007 05:21 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
GITC, I like this already--you have sucha great way of making these AUs so real! I love your list of things that have happened in Pam's life, it's so realistic and in character.
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so very much. I whittled down that list from a longer one and am glad that it worked for you. Thanks as always for your review.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 05:06 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
intrigue. (inn-treeg). verb. (transitive). To arouse the curiosity of or interest of; fascinate.
See also: Mose.
:)
Author's Response: Awww Mose. Thanks for the review! I'm so glad I was able to intrigue you and hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint.
Date: November 27, 2007 04:53 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
I like this style of writing, its an interesting way to pull me into it. I'm gonna keep reading because, 1) I like the plotty thingy, and 2) I like this style. Update soon please! :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Thanks for your review.
Date: November 27, 2007 04:23 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
GITC. You own me. That is all.
Author's Response: Well, Lisahoo. Your reviews own me. Can we call it even? Thanks as always for reviewing. You rock!
Date: November 27, 2007 03:22 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
I have no idea how you manage to come up with all these great plots for stories, Mel, but I'm not a complainer and this one sounds as intriguing as "Observer Effect." Looking foward to where you take this.
Author's Response: EH Thanks so much! As I said in another review, I'm trying not to duplicate some of the things I had going on in my last story. I hope to keep it fresh. Thanks so much for your review.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 02:13 am Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
You are a writing machine. Looking forward to this, always my favorite type of fic.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jimpong!
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 11:31 pm Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
Me=extremely excited about this new venture of yours. The angst, the intrigue, the smut (what? a girl can dream). Great work, as always!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, WB. I can promise you angst and intrigue and sshhhh....there's a little bit of smut in my outline as well. As always, I'm so appreciative of your reviews.
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 11:29 pm Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
Looks good so far! Can't wait for more (as always)
Author's Response: Thanks!
5 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 10:41 pm Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
I was very excited to see you wrote something else I love your stories and I'm sure this one won't disappoint. I really like Jim and Pam season two. I loved the banter between Jim and Pam. And your perception on Pam was great Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review. I really hope that it doesn't disappoint. I like season 2 Jim and Pam as well, though, as you can guess, some things in the story will change that dynamic. Thanks again for your review.
Date: November 26, 2007 10:25 pm Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
How are you so prolific? And this promises to be just as much of a suck-in as "How Long" and "Observer Effect". It's stories like these that have me constantly logging on to MTT. Looking forward to going on the ride w/ you!
Author's Response: I think I can be so prolific because I don't have a life :) I'm so glad you like this and I know what you mean about getting hooked on a certain type of story. I hope you like the ride you're about to embark on.
Date: November 26, 2007 10:03 pm Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
I'm interested to see where this goes. And Tommy Boy is easily one of the greatest movies of all time.
Author's Response:
Tommy Boy is probably one of my favorite movies of all time. SShhhhhh.
Thanks so much for your review.
Date: November 26, 2007 10:00 pm Title: And Our Sky Was Unfolding
GodInThisChilis--You could write phone book entries and I would think they were genius. This is SO much better. My interest is piqued, and I'm ready to watch the magic unfold from your fingertips. GO! :-) -CH
Author's Response: CH-- You are so very kind and I'm hoping that I don't let you down. Thanks, as always, for your supportive reviews.