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What an intriguing twist! I really like the concept for your story, even though i only have a rudimentary knowledge of The Divine Comedy. You write the dialogue of the characters and the inner-dialogue of Jim really well. I am so very curious to see where you take this - whether or not you are going to force Jim through the rings of Hell, Purgatory and Heaven, or whether you have a completely different ambition for you story. Either way, it is very interesting reading. I hope there's more soon!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it so far, epiphilly.  I think my latest posted chapter should explain a little bit of where I'm going...I hope that's the one that will keep you more entertained!  Thanks for the review. :)