Date: December 05, 2007 06:19 pm Title: Airing Dirty Laundry
Wow, this is really really good - the last 2 chapters with Jim's flashback/memories were excellent, I especially liked how you captured the intimacy of Jim lifting Pam up to put the star on the tree. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you Jordon! I'm glad you liked it...I thought the tree star thing was something very Jim and Pam, intimate but not terribly so as to go past the friend boundary. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much!
Date: December 05, 2007 05:19 pm Title: Airing Dirty Laundry
This is a really interesting story, but I am seriously, seriously confused. Michael said Jim wasn't dead, but now he's in hell? Can you perhaps clarify for me?
Author's Response:
OK, I probably should have clarified a little better before. Jim is not dead. He mentioned that he wasn't certain if it was a strange reality or just a dream...but to help you out a little, it's definitely a dream.