9 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2008 08:25 pm Title: Have you ever had a crush on a coworker?
STL--I'm a few days late in my promise to read this, so damn me, right? But here I am, and I'm so happy I came (TWSS)! This was really a splendid chapter. You capture a brilliant Creed; his initial chat with Jim had me in stitches. I think the 03/03/03 party was great, and I was on the edge of my seat waiting for them to reveal their answers to the quiz. You deserve props for writing a good "pain scene," too. This might sound odd, I suppose, but the language and imagery you used to convey Jim's broken nose and Roy's all-fall-down moment was fabulous; I could really see (and hear!) the whole thing going down. Well done, my friend, and good luck with the next installment!! I'll be the one over here waiting with a pitchfork. --CH
Date: March 28, 2008 11:56 am Title: Have you ever had a crush on a coworker?
My favorite chapter thus far! Poor Jim, that was a pretty rough flashback. Nothing like being left broken, bleeding and alone. You've got quite a knack at writing angst. I'm "angst-ious" to see where this will go from here. Thanks for sharing, post more soon. :)
Date: March 25, 2008 05:47 pm Title: Have you ever had a crush on a coworker?
I am MORE than happy to help whenever I can! :) As I said before, really liked this chapter. Love the craziness of Creed and then the hallmark-ness of his answer to question 19. Great job!