Date: December 11, 2007 08:37 am Title: Interactions
this looks like its gonna be fun
Date: December 10, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Interactions
Very interesting take on the events of PW...I like that you put in all those cute little moments. Looking forward to reading more :o)
Author's Response: This was the point in season 3 that we lost the playful Jim and Pam that we know and love, so I liked writing them. Thanks for reviewing! It really makes my day.
Date: December 10, 2007 07:32 am Title: Interactions
Oooooooohh I like where this is going...so keep going!!!
7 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Interactions
"Karen, catching on, turned in mock disapproval, “Jim if someone else is on your mind, then I should just give up now. Really, I can’t compete.”
Great line - is that what's called a self-fulfilling prophecy?
Author's Response:
Thanks! This line was going to be a lot more foreshadowing/stating of fact than it is nowbut I figured it was a little too over the top, even for my imaginary universe about imaginary characters.
10 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2007 05:43 pm Title: Interactions
loving this story! cannot wait to read more!
Date: December 09, 2007 05:04 pm Title: Interactions
Really, they were so cute together. The all-American couple. They’d be on a commercial for wedding rings or condoms.
I love that line. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was having trouble describing Karen and Jim because I was so biased (words like 'wrong' and 'eww' come to mind), and this line popped into my head.
Date: December 09, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Interactions
great story. I never liked how that episode ended and this was adorable. I can't wait till the next chapter
9 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Interactions
Looking forward to the next chapter - always happy with a new ending to that wedding!! ;-)