Reviews For Hypothetical
Reviewer: Annika Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 10:26 pm Title: The Terrace
Author's Response: No, I completely agree! It seems like something he would say a lot, especcialy if he were semi-drunk. Thanks for the review!!
Date: December 15, 2007 10:26 pm Title: The Terrace
Okay, is it just me? Or is it pretty hot to think of Jim saying the word fuck. Sorry, just had to get that out there. On a more civilized note however, I truly am enjoying your story and really looking forward to the next update:)
Author's Response: No, I completely agree! It seems like something he would say a lot, especcialy if he were semi-drunk. Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 
8 [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 08:29 pm Title: The Terrace
Author's Response: Thanks! For the review and the correction. Karen walking around amidst our lovely couple would really bring down the mood.
8 [Report This]Date: December 15, 2007 08:29 pm Title: The Terrace
"She could feel the warmth of his arm through the thin white cotton of his shirt, and could only hope that he was the next course."
Great line.
And I think you meant to say "wondering" here - “Karen. Probably wandering where I am.” Unless of course she is actually walking around right there. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! For the review and the correction. Karen walking around amidst our lovely couple would really bring down the mood.