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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2023 02:24 am Title: Creative Advertisement

Very funny, especially Michael asking Pam to unbutton her top button (advice she actually followed in Season 3, Episode 2!).

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2009 08:26 am Title: Creative Advertisement

Bwahahaha, oh this is priceless. The way she knew how to manipulate him, Jim is right, Pam is a genius. *grin*

Reviewer: HellaShelle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2008 10:58 pm Title: Creative Advertisement

LOL!!! Why is there no sequel to this?! Seriously, could there please be a sequel? That would be hysterical. I really want to know what happened to that tape.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Creative Advertisement

Suh-weet. I am so giggling like Kevin right now.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2007 10:36 am Title: Creative Advertisement

Wow... very randy.  I actually think your Michael is very funny and in character.  Jim's reactions had me giggling as well.  "Nnnnope."  Haha!  So true.  Very cute story.

Reviewer: thirtypercent Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 10:10 pm Title: Creative Advertisement

HA.  That was excellent.  I love the way you write these characters -- even Jim's thoughts sound like Jim:

They'd just, do away with the tape afterwards...or like...take it with them...

That definitely put a smile on my face. :) 

 

Reviewer: nandance Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 12:15 pm Title: Creative Advertisement

This was great! I loved Jim's line, "is this because you lost the celebrity porn file?"...AWESOME!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 11:01 am Title: Creative Advertisement

BWAAAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!  Niiiice.  [/Kevin]

Reviewer: BeckySue Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 10:30 am Title: Creative Advertisement

"Not graphic enough," Michael muttered angrily under his breath.

Loved that....very well done.

Reviewer: Sharipep Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 07:51 am Title: Creative Advertisement

bwahahha YAY! I love that Jam are together! Stuff like this just proves how perfect they are for one another. i love the way you write PB&J, you really know their characters well. Damn this damn writers strike and the studios! Damn all the studios! Oh, right, I digress.

This was super funny. I think they should take the tape home. :)

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 07:13 am Title: Creative Advertisement

Cute! The perfect serving of fluff to start off my day. I loved Michael's "not graphic enough" line. Well done! -CH

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 05:59 am Title: Creative Advertisement

I haven't even read the first sentence but I think this story will prove why Michael should never be in charge of anything.

Oh Michael! Michael Michael Michael! (oh and Jim's nope.... so totally what would happen!)

Haha! "it's not national." "not that that's.... the point" AWESOME!

AND HA! WOW! At the end.... Wow.... Trust me, little kids don't do what they are planning on doing! Haha Great!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 05:50 am Title: Creative Advertisement

Oh nooooooooooooooo!  So funny and so original.  I don't know how this never would have occurred to me but I can totally see it. 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 05:23 am Title: Creative Advertisement

Why, you sneaky thing! How funny and sexy is this little fic? Great Michael (or more if you want - hee!) and this moment was pure Jim: Jim's head shot up, "Nnnope." I also like that it's fancy new pornstar-Pam who makes the dare. 

If this happened on the show (and why not?) I think you'd hear the pop of a zillion fans' heads simultaneously imploding. In the happiest way ;-)

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 04:40 am Title: Creative Advertisement

This was so great, LoveFool.  It sounded just like a scene from the show.  Those two really are like little kids daring each other.  So funny.  Michael's comment about Oscar was perfect too.  And "not graphic enough."  Ha!

Reviewer: Recorderalways Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 12:41 am Title: Creative Advertisement

Hahahahaha...."It's not national, not that that's the point." Spot on Jim. Oh, who am I kidding...spot on man. ;) Thanks for the chuckle, Lovefool. This was great.

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