10 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2008 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
AWWWWW i LOVED it!!!! so cute, loved them interaction with jim and angela, and jim and pam (duh)
Date: December 25, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
Really cute. The little insight into Angela's feelings was great. We're used to Angela being cold and hard, it was nice for you to show that she's aware of how she comes off, but is almost too scared to change that perception.
Date: December 23, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aw, this was fun and sweet and just what I needed if I couldn't have a real Christmas episode. I love the way you handled Toby, and also the D/A/A triangle. That's just how those two plot lines should play out on screen!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: December 21, 2007 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great job with this story. I love how they shook hands with each other, cute. Silly kids. And that signing the love contract gives their relationship "meaning".
I'm sure you'll heal up quickly dear, and will soon be enjoying "chewy" food again. Take it easy now.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :) (And I'm really looking forward to eating some pizza... but I am nowhere near there yet, sadly.)
Date: December 21, 2007 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh, this is exactly what I needed today! Great way to wrap up the story and awesome job overall :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)
Date: December 21, 2007 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww, the HR papers! Nice finish, carbondalien!
Feel better!
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you! :)
Date: December 21, 2007 10:05 am Title: Chapter 6
this was a perfect ending (: this whole story was perfect !
Author's Response: Wow, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 09:14 am Title: Chapter 6
this story is wonderful. all the characters are spot-on. i hope that they have something similar to this on the show regarding toby, and is sadness over pam. and i could totally see michael saying something like "So Jim and Pam are probably going to go home and get naked and touch each other! So what?" that actually made me snort! so funny! well done!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I feel like the Toby/Pam issue would be dealt with in a subtle way, just because of how Toby is.
Date: December 21, 2007 09:04 am Title: Chapter 6
This was really cute! I enjoyed reading it a lot. Nice job with the dialogue, it felt true to the characters. And I really liked how you explored the Jim and Angela dynamic. Good luck with your wisdom teeth. Too bad you can't watch Lifetime movies with Jim and Pam!
Author's Response: I'm happy people think I was true to the characters in this - that's the best compliment. I'm glad you liked it. (And I wouldn't mind watching Lifetime movies with Jim and Pam... and eating actual food!)
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 08:26 am Title: Chapter 6
Very sweet ending! I just wish the show was back to see Dwight and Angela really make up! Hope your wisdom teeth discomfort passes soon!!! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you. :) Right now I can't wait to eat some real food. Pudding, Jello, and mashed potatoes are not really that filling.
Date: December 21, 2007 07:42 am Title: Chapter 6
Hey, great job, carbon! You rock. Great ending.
Author's Response: You rock for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. :)