Date: July 21, 2009 08:49 am Title: Elevator Buttons
Just found this story and loved it - esp. the perfect ending!
Date: January 08, 2008 06:52 am Title: Elevator Buttons
I don't know why I never commented on this but anyways now that it's over a gret big thank you. Really enjoyed that last update. Just adorable!
8 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2008 12:41 pm Title: Carrots
I am getting VERY excited for the last chapter! Good job!
Author's Response: :D thank you! glad ur enjoying it!
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2008 02:19 pm Title: Elevator Buttons
Really love this story. The watermelon and chocolate images were so real I could almost taste it.
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2008 02:18 pm Title: Elevator Buttons
Really love this story. The watermelon and chocolate images were so real I could almost taste it.
Date: December 31, 2007 07:32 am Title: Birthdays and teddy bears
Excellent story! I'm really enjoying it. Please continue!
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9 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2007 09:17 pm Title: Birthdays and teddy bears
how come more people are not reviewing this? how come i haven't (that i'm aware of?)
this story is amazing. please finish quickly! yeahhh!
Author's Response: lol thank you!!!!!! :D
Date: December 29, 2007 04:12 am Title: Lips of Chocolate and Watermelons
Just found this story and it's awesome!! How can you just leave it there>? I think thats very evil of you! Sooo good! I love the references to Jim's temperture, I think it would definatly apply! I'm sooo excited that they finally kissed! Can't wait for it to happen again!! Please hurry back with more!!!
Author's Response: aww thank you! lol i'm glad ur enjoying it!!!! and don't worry more to come soon!!! thanx for commenting<3333
10 [Report This]Date: December 28, 2007 09:02 pm Title: Lips of Chocolate and Watermelons
Very good writing! Keep the chapters coming!
Author's Response: :DDD thank you for commenting!
9 [Report This]Date: December 28, 2007 08:37 pm Title: Lips of Chocolate and Watermelons
Yum. I liked that.
Author's Response: yes jim= yum :D thank you for commenting!
Date: December 21, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Silence and Understandings
I love this story how vulnerable and quiet they both are and I also love the warm/cold comparison and the warm/hot comparison. And I really loved the ending. Great writing!
Author's Response: aw thank you!!!<3
Date: December 21, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Silence and Understandings
Chapter 3 is your best yet. It is really emotional and well written. I was captivated the whole time. Nice job.
Author's Response: thank you so much :D
Date: December 20, 2007 06:42 pm Title: warm hands and pouring rain
ok thats what I thought the timeline was, but umm why would pam need roy's truck? she has her own car, why if she's broken up with roy did she get a ride with him? i totally understand the need for her to be stranded as a plot device (its one i enjoy, 'coming to the rescue jim' is one of my favorites) anyway thats why i asked before...
Author's Response: i tried adding in that since she just broke up with roy that shes so used to taking roys truck to work, or being with him in the truck on the way 0.o...i should have been more specific lol
Date: December 19, 2007 08:13 pm Title: warm hands and pouring rain
i'm not sure what the timeline for this is, is pam living with roy still? is jim living with karen? when in season three is this? i think this is a neat story but i would appreciate if these details were made clearer.
Author's Response: its right after the negotation. so pam broke up with roy after he started throwing things in the bar. and karen and jim are together, but not living together...i hope thats clearer! thanx for reading